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please!

if you ever have the time, continue this story!

Love it!!
hope you keep writing it in the future :)

This is very well written with only a few errors that i coud see. I cab't wait for more, I really hope Draco and Harry end up together>

Wow, wonderful story and so original, I haven't read another like it. I love it! Thank you for sharing your work and I can't wait until your next update. ^_^

I saw your story posted a while back. I was able to start reading two days ago. You have kept me reading and not wanting to stop till I finished what you had posted. I do not know how often you post or what your inspiraiton is behind this chaotic story. I say chaotic because that is how it make my body feel. It makes me want to hurt so much. You have made the characters come alive with their pain, sorrow, memories and all the emotions that we humans are capable of. As am wrting this I am remembering all of what I have read and find it hard to keep my tears inside. I cannot help it. Draco should not have died. Please I hope you will respond to my review on a more personal level liz alya 13 yaho. I hope you will be able to understand the more personal method.
Liz

I'm super glad you updated this! Wonderful job. Draco's plight is much worse than Harry's either time, since both times he's wanted something that was out of reach. I look forward to where you take this from here.

Oh, I feel so bad for poor Draco! I can't wait for things to start changing between both him and Harry!

Please update chapter 36 soon ^_^

Jan

very very good chapter keep going
and post soooooooooooooooooon
bye bye

ps let them be lovers :)

OH!!!!!!!! poor Draco, he is so lonely and loved starved, it

Read this straight through in a few hours and I'm truly loving this peice. I've recently shied away from such couples like this mainly due to reading "Breaking Dawn" (a novel), and have subsequently started to enjoy Harry/Snape fanfiction less and less as well. Something about feeling feelings for the person's kid that you used to think of in less than an appropriate fashion just seems very wrong somehow, and yet...I really enjoyed this set up. Perhaps it is due to the fact that you kept his son's name "Draco", because I'm sure my feelings on it would have changed quite a bit to have to read about a main character in fanfiction who was made up. But besides that, I don't know why but I'm really enjoying this. It is sad that nothing will be able to refute for Harry that Senior Draco never loved him. Except perhaps a look at the diary, but I doubt that will hone any more answers. Their coupling is on some level sweet as both share common experiences, and a common wish to be needed and loved. A question, is the diary of S.Draco visual or completely text form? I find it interesting that you made Little Draco show up at the school in hopes of meeting the man that his father wrote about. John is an interesting addition into the story and I rather think of his character as the child of Dumbledore and Minerva. Knowledgeable with even the eye twinkle, but still a firm and harshness. Anyways, wonderful job so far.