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Um. So I was just randomly checking around and I saw that apparently you'd added a chapter. And I was like "hawhaaaaatomg" because I love how you write Piers and yeah. So thanks so much for adding a chapter, and I would love to read more of Dudley "practicing" with *cough* Jennifer.

Woh, I never imagined myself reading this pairing, though it's not that far fetched. I was surprised that when there was only one story in this catagory that it was actually really good. It doesn't seem like a two-shot (I hope not xp) so I can't wait for the next update CX

this is disturbing, and morally wrong.

Dude it rules!!!!

continue, from

Imperial 13

That's superb - and who would have thought Big D and Piers would be interesting? Would love to see more.

Wow. I couldn't even remember who this kid was, but this story is amazing. I thought that it would be some horrible drabble that made no sense and seemed to be written by a third grader. I've been proven wrong.

You are an amazing writer. I first only clicked on this story because I was bored and wanted to read soemthing new. I've become addicted now!!

I'm not sure how you are going to progress with this story, but I really hope that you do. Jennifer...heh. I'd love to see some dress-up going on ;D Maybe some role-playing? But I would love it if Dudley ended up being gay...

I also would like to request that there's no 'Parents find out and cause angst' drama like that. This secerative smut it really amazing and it is hard to find stories out there that are really well written sex that still keep your intrest without going overboard. I believe that you have/will be able to accomplish this.

So please, POST!!

<3

more. it is differant. i like differant

OMG!!!!! I'm so glad that I got you to continue!!!!! I really love your stories, and this new chapter just put the icing on the cake!!!! I lvoe how you show Dudley as being in control and all manly like!!!!! Oh, and the "Jennifer" part was priceless. Dudley is making Piers his new bitch!!!! LOL!!!! PLEASE DO MORE!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAASEEE!! This would be a great series.

Fabulous. I've always wondered about Piers...

"What now, slag?".... Something that I will think from now on whenever some straight-curious guy checks me out (I'll think it in a British accent, too).....
~Briar

it was smut.
no uts.
SMUT!
I liked it. It made me laugh. well written smut and a cheap wank

But honestly, I don't feel like looking under the surface all the time. and right now is one of those times.

Ahh! I don't know how you do it. Big muscles are so ewwwww. That said, it was very tightly written-- it felt real enough that I was made uncomfortable by references to chest hair (eww!)

Two particular lines I noticed:

"He