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for How far he fell

by Grittie

person Dezra
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story. I love their life together. It feels so simple but complete. Well done.
person misslala
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a beautiful piece. It wasn't graphic, but it wasn't needed. It was simple and beautiful in its own way ;) Thank you for sharing.
person Annie
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I really like the last line. Lovely job!
person cerichan
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
L.O.V.E. it!

Up for a sequel?

Please?

Pretty please?
*puppy eyes*

Just another little chapter, like a peer into future life, maybe Draco could be the new potion Master (it seems as if Snape isn't so anymore), and some little love scenes at Hogwards....or whatever you'd like.
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
person Kireania
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. I love it. I do believe that the sex scene could have been drawn out to be sweeter and longer. Also I do think that the longer sex scene would have to include a few more insecurities that Draco would continue to have since he had been so brutally raped multiple times. That would only have added to the wonderful writing that is already present here. I love how this flowed though, it was indeed wonderful.

Ja ne
Kireania