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hey are you going to continue this or should i just delete it from my list??
e-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
...ta

Aya

Oh how horrible! Is he sure that's what Voldemort did? Surely someone would have checked to see if he was actually dead or not? Maybe it was a ploy to break his spirit. Hope the writer's block gets better. Sooo can't wait for chapter 3!

It was because it was a one shot. As for the new chapter... I am still geting a very weird vibe from the story. you said in your AN that you had an all smut fic in your head, I say go for it. Unlike many of my fellow fic addicts, I am not a pansy fluff monger, who is scared of a good shag scene. winks and hugs !!!

...That was pure evil, attack on a wedding day, and created havoc across the community...I cannot say whether that was a blessing or a curse, to be the one, left alone alive while all others were killed - the only reason - they were close and important to you.

No wonder Harry would take up such habit, and found no salvation in anyone, anything and anytime at all. The survival guilt was just too big, too much to bear, so even with a daughter, a wife and a family - there was no promised future...

Oh, this is a lovely and sad tale. Harry needs some serious therapy. I hate writer's block so much, it can be torture. Too many things in your head bursting to come out can do that easily. I suggest writing... as silly as that sounds. Start up a tale, when writer's block hits - start another, keep doing it until those thoughts are out. Put the half-written tales aside and let your conscience decide what it wants to do. That's what I do anyway. I hope "In Between" is continued, but no pressure at all. I love that story so much! *big massive hug!*

Great fic! Really get the readers attention.. poor Harry! No wonder he started drinking! One thing though: This is not a oneshot nor is it finished. You should change that.. Its awfully frustrating to read something thinking that it's finished and it's not

Interesting. Makes one want to know just how Harry is doing. His situation and all. Nice.

After reading this, the first word to pop in my head was... HUH!? It is very good, but it reads less like a1shot, and more lgke the first chapter of a nice sized fic. I totally understand the writers block thing, but this is worth continuing. hugs!

...why did Harry drink? Any explanation? And if Draco's name is cleared, why did the Ministry still hold the Manor?

Interesting! I sooo need chapter 2!