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by vladfannyc

schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*glares at you* you know what I'm going to say...
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gahhhhhhhhhhh nuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! *sob* Harry hurt him! lol well Draco hurt Harry pretty bad too lmao but I'm the kind of hopeless romantic that just wants them to kiss and make up and shag XD What happens nowwww?
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Guess I was wrong. Sooo need chapter 7! So Harry is literally fighting for Draco. Who cheated as well. So why was Draco sooo angry? Can only Malfoys cheat?
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering though. Why does Draco think Harry has shagged half of London? Did he?
person Cloud646
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think either harry has missinterpreted what draco has been doing or i'm confused...which is very possible. I though that draco simply enjoyed wrestling, thats not really infidelety. very interesting though, glad to see harry is starting to fight back.
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't like this. I love the fic, but you just keep leaving them so short. O'well, I guess I will live. Keep up the great work.
Kat
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok seriously?!? you just get to the good part then stop! *whines* it's not fair! at least post 2-3 pages at a time! pleeeease?!? *pouts*
Stef
person NightLo
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...I never though Harry could put his 'experience' with such good use - bad that Draco had not expect...

But Draco's infidelity? Wasn't only Harry? Draco only kept his likeliness on...'masculine act' secret, but never...never stayed with another person...I just didn't get the idea very well....

Let's see who anger can pepper up longer!
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, the most random challenge ever but I just cannot stop reading it! hahah I WANT TO KNOW WHO WINS! And honestly, even if Draco does, he should just take Harry back for giving him that brutal beating hahahaha And I love how Harry was all angry that Draco was keeping his wrestling interests secret and somehow equated that to his having slept with someone else hahahah I love it! More please!
person Cloud646
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, gettin really hot. again i really didn't expect anyone to actualy write what i had suggested awhile back, but i am pleasantly surprised by how this fic is turning out.