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by vladfannyc

schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhh that's so mean to leave it off there! O_O Nuuuuuu! And yet somehow, I hate wrestling (the tv stuff) but this is quite hot O_O I think I'm a sadist hahahah I want so much for Draco to lose or give in so that Harry can prove how much he really loves him! GAH Im worried this won't end well *ded* Must see more!
person Cloud646
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for another chappy :D, i find myself waiting till midnight everynight for these updates lol, cant wait for more. looks like draco may actual do some verbal punishment soon, heh, hope it stings!! lol
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Enough with the wrestling, get on with the story.
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hate you. i really do. *disgruntled look*
Please please let the climax of the fight be a *slightly* longer chapter than normal! PLEEEEASE!
person NightLo
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If...if ever...Draco is being so strong - there is no chance for him to be fully 'bounded' and 'cornered' and 'tackled' by others - on the other hand - I would say...poor guys, and you should ask one brunette for treatment payment!
person ZooArmy
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, luckily in reality wrestling is just show and all and they don't hurt each other for real, because after everything Draco & Harry have done to each other until now, they couldn't even lift a bloody finger anymore. In reality, that is!

I hope they are done soon and get back to bed *tehe*
person Cloud646
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is gettin intense, i love it, would love some more commentary during the match; trash talk maybe or more yelling about why they are fighting in the first place. love the fighting though, keep it up :D
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I think this has gotten out of hand! I sooo need chapter 8! Not sure either of them are going to get out of this in one piece. Draco must really want out of this relationship.
person NightLo
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...too bloody fierce - now they both angered their heat out in a total wrong way, but on the other hand, I think it is lucky that they are for one another, or with other partner, they DIE already!

Draco - add oil, don't give up such fight too easily - after all, you chose this kind of challenge! And...and I would like to see Harry's submit/give up to hurt you...
person Annie
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god...they're getting so violent! I hope they don't end up killing each other...