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by vladfannyc

person Cloud646
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heh, harry's startin to put things together. i can only imagine the hot sex that will follow lol.
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGosh!!! Harry is so pissed off right now. I really do like this story. Keep up the good work.
Kat
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Draco didn't cheat. Okay I forgive him. Was really upset with him for a bit. Need chapter 11!
person Cloud646
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hot hot hot, oh now draco's in trouble. heh, you'd think that after learning that draco hadn't really cheated on harry, would make harry feel even worse because he's been fighting with a rage that was falsely justified. but i guess thats just our hot headed gryffindor for you.
person NightLo
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...my only response - when did BOTH Harry and Draco grow up and be more mature towards each other?
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a very interesting take on the whole harry/draco thing. good thing i love wrestling. draco wrestler? well after all this foreplay the sex should be something else.
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahah! Draco's so sneaky X_X I love it! Gah must have moreee! I hope good things come of this ;)
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So why again is Draco upset for Harry cheating? I sooo need chapter 10! They are killing each other! Is this a test? If Harry can defeat him and fight him then he proved what? That he really loves Draco? That he'd fight for him? Not sure it's worth it anymore. After all Draco implied he cheated too. Why isn't Harry mad about that? Or why hasn't he yelled at Draco more about it? I'd call him a hypocrite! Remind him of that. When people are mad they make mistakes.
person NightLo
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...what a slytherin trick, using Harry's care to attack...hum, lucky that Voldi was gone and cannot use the same trick! But I must agree - a wet and throughout soaked underpant...framing a firm ass...showing all the crevices and slope...hum...what a delicious view...

Now Draco won and what would he do with Harry?
person Cloud646
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...all i can say is..that's hot! How many chapters are left?