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for For Cloud 646

by vladfannyc

person Annie
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay so NOW we're finally getting somewhere!! :]
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So now they're both wrestling naked! *shakes head* Need chapter 13!
person NightLo
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So...'dirty' play now? That would only be hotter and more erotic...
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah that was painfully short *sob* I wants more! Though I love Draco's little turn there with his mischievous smirk :D Can't wait for more!
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome! loving harry's revenge! Of course, I was considering begging for longer chapters but seen as that hasn't worked so far... maybe i should just quit... anyway, hoping some conclusion is reached soonish...
Stef
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome! loving harry's revenge! Of course, I was considering begging for longer chapters but seen as that hasn't worked so far... maybe i should just quit... anyway, hoping some conclusion is reached soonish...
Stef
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh tooo funny! I sooo need chapter 12!
person NightLo
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...again, I must admit - their strength is just enormous and great - they still can fight after such a heated combat! And...really - taking other's pants off was not a sincere and noble act - if not for turning other on!
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA that was an awesome and very random ending to that chapter X_x Gah I wants them to just shag right now hahahah the whole comment about them rubbing against one another was NOT good for my mind! NOR for my patience! hahaha Please more?
person Annie
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god would they stop fighting already? They're getting on my nerves...I'm waiting for the hot make-up sex!! ;)