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by vladfannyc

schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You had better run and run quick. I don't know if I want to kill you or let you live so that you will finish this damn story. Keep up the good work.
Kat
person Cloud646
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wooow...this is getting very hot.
person Annie
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo yayy!! =D More more more!
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dam straight there's outrage from the readers! we've had words about these short chapters of yours!
Anyhoo, liking where this is heading so far.... keep it up
Stef
person NightLo
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...you did owe us an explanation - now please explain!

And really, they are still much boyish enough - at one they were fighting, then suddenly they were touching and touching!
person sable_silverrain
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WTF?!?!?!?!?!?! NOT COOL!!!!!!!!!!
person Cloud646
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay, the sexyness is progressing :D. your doing an awesome job, cant wait for more.
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha! oh that was simply adorable! loving the now playful nature coming into it and draco's answer of 'maybe' to whether they were broken up! Sort of makes me think they're going to be together no matter the outcome of the fight! aww!
More soon please!
Stef
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*jawdrop* you just ended it THERE? *GASP* That's just........ sooooooooo unfair! AHHH PLEASEEEEE POST AGAIN! Ahh I need to know what happens next! DETAILS I NEED! lol Ahhh this is just cruel.
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Those two! It's turning sexual now. So how will it go? Sooo need chapter 14!