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for For Cloud 646

by vladfannyc

schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha! i had a feeling that was what it was... although i was kinda hoping for another chapter along with the disclosure... *pout*
person Cloud646
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Christeen" mistake? i think i must have missed that. although it, in my opinion, is still a good story and i'm surprised how well its turning out.
person Cloud646
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
steamy. love it, not much else i can say, keep up the good work.
person NightLo
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...such cliff hanger is just too...> O <

As this is a present, right? So you should give it once and for all!
person Annie
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh finally! This is more like it :] More smut please!
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank the Gods. Harry finally won the fight. It was kind of a low blow move, but it was very effective if I may say so. Keep up the good work.
Kat
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Im so glad Draco took Harry back though that was underhanded *teehee* lol I love it ^^ I must have the end! Ahhh!
person Cloud646
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, i'd hope that wasn't the end...its getting to HOT!
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bloody well better not be the end you know! loving the end of the fight and can't wait to see what they do after this... hope you're as good as writing the mushy stuff as you are at writing the violent stuff!
Stef :D
person NightLo
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know - with such 'treatment' to such 'important equipment' - a detail checkup is very much needed!