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by lazycrazykitten

person In2Deep
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well you almost answered my question before i asked it... i was wondering if Harry was going to be able to do anything to/with Voldemort because of how awful he looks... after training with Lucius and him being beautiful and all... one has to wonder! I have to go with changing his looks, maybe making him look about mid to late twentys? your discription sounds wonderful... just really hope that he dosent do anything to Harry before that... Harry having lived a sheltered life and all it might be a tad to much for his brain to handle... but yea up-dates soon!
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, please continue
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start so far. I look forward to the next chapter.
person Danine
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry, Voldemort, and bondage, you say? Yes please! Get the next chapter posted!
person MrGalion
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a new spin.
person Selera
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow nice I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for another chapter. Please continue.It is very interestig. I like it.
person Danine
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh an update already! Don't worry about going too fast, write this story as you want at the pace that feels comfortable for you. I'd much prefer to read this tale with your express approval rather than a forced writing. It's a good start, I very much love a pretty, innocent Harry (swoon!) and he's all saved up for Voldemort and knows nothing of the world....oh my lord that's wickedly evil.

I love that Draco doesn't know much of him right now, that keeps him blissfully innocent as well. I'm curious about how you'll bring Voldemort back and what his appearance will look like and how Harry will react to him. There's so much material to work with here (being a massive HP/LV shipper myself) it's always exciting to see someone else play with these characters how they want to play with them. Mr. Malfoy training Harry how to be a great cock-sucker for his master is so fun, I wrote that myself once in a short story and still get shudders when I think of how utterly demented it is.

Anyhow, welcome to writing! I hope you stay and enjoy it enough to continue on here with this. It's dark, it's perverted, it's lovely. I'm itching to read more! Have your way with this and post up when you can!!! *hugs* Maiz
person In2Deep
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice! looks good so far, cant wait to see where Voldemort comes into play! dose harry know magic, or dose he just read about it? humms... well up-dates soon i cant wait!