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for Dark Gifts

by lazycrazykitten

schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I wanted to see Draco get a chunk (figuratively speaking) taken out of him because he was nasty to Harry!
Maybe next time? Please? Oh and toys always add a little something to the story!
person MrGalion
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the Quotes.
OMG I cant believe i missed a chapter...
HOw could I do such a thing...
Oh well.. I was so excited by the long chapter.
I even got to read two :)
Snape n' Draco I sence are in trouble... They beter keep their hands off harry.
BTW: I love raven as a name.
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! You're not gonna take Harry away from Voldie are you?
Could you maybe just taunt the Order with his presence, not
take him away? I think it might just drive Voldie insane if he
was taken, well, more so than he is... but update soon so I don't have to
keep biting my nails!!!
person anniea
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR UPDATING SO OFTEN. did i mention thank you? i didn't? really in that case TTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNKKKKKKKK YYYYYYYYYYOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! whoo glad i got that off my chest. this story is amazing. i have no questions to ask you except to keep updating asap. not right away because absence makes the heart grow fonder. which i definitely found out when i read the updates for your story. so thanks again for making my night and *KISSES*
person Danine
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, well honestly I was only teasing about the nicknames... I used "kitten" myself in a story I wrote in 2003, and I'm not the only one back then, Mistres Potter, and one other, can't recall her name. I wouldn't say anyone 'owned' a nickname. I prefer now just to call Harry 'baby', it's very fitting to me. I suppose teasing doesn't come out well in print though. Whatever you call him is fine with me... Maiz
person Jan
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see if Dumbledore does gets his hands on Harry, if he does I really and I mean really can't wait to see what Voldemort's reaction to that will be. What will his wrath be like, in order for him to have his little Raven.

Oh! I hope Sirius accepts Harry for who he is and not be disappointed in him for being Voldemort's slave, though I like to think that in time that is going to change to a mutual relationship.

As for Draco...I hope he doesn't do anything dumb. He doesn't seems to be such a little bastard and Lucius seems to really love his son and if something was to happen to him he would be devastated. Please update soon. ^_^
person Jan
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story so far. I think Harry and Voldemort are a great pairing. In this story they are so sweet together. I just hope Draco stop being a prick to Harry.

Gods, I couldn't stop laughing when they went to the Adults toy store and Draco keep demanding to go into the "Toy Store". That part reminded me of the way my father raised us. He always told my mother that the best way for us to learn bot to touch or grab something was to let us do it just once. That's how I burned my hand once...or twice. Once on the stove and the other time with matches. Anyway...Please update soon. ^_^
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it, the showder sex is hot!! the story continue to get hotter and hotter everytime i read it!!
person akume
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe they used the majority of the sex toys so soon. Don't they know about saving it for a rainy day. ~sighs~ Bunch of nymphos. Anyhow, I love how the story's progress at a steady pace. Until next time.
person In2Deep
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dracos and ass! my goodness hes a big spoild baby! and poor harry just wants a friend... oh well, im sure that he'll learn soon enough! but when will we see Raven doing som magic? that should be intresting! as for sev, the onlything i can think of instead of being killed is to have to swear his loyalty to Harry and take and oath to protect him for the rest of his natrual life. something to that effect should work, but at the same time killing him off dose have an certain up-side to it... lol. any whos good chappie... like the "Toy" shop...lol.. up-dates soon please!