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by lazycrazykitten

schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Would have reviewed the last chapter but I had a class yesterday. When I read it I enjoyed it. I liked the Remus and Sirius action and cant wait to add in Lucius. You mention Sirius getting around, so I was wondering if when they become a threesome if that will cause issues. I just see Lucius as a possesive type and would be pisses if anyone touched what was his. Loved the chapter and look forward to more.
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I loved it when Draco got weirded out when Tom kissed Harry
person RheaSama
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel both bad for, and annoyed by Draco in your story. Just want to smack him for not getting it though his head. Do. Not. Touch.

Well, for you Ohio is hot, for me Texas is hot. We stay too long and just get used to is. If we switched, I think you would have to be nude to reduce suffering, and I'd probably have on three layers of clothes, heehee.

There really arn't enough good Fenrir stories. I'll have to keep my eyes open for it.
- Rhea
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DRACO! The new spy is DRACO? I probably should have seen that coming, but he didn't seem the type. I was sort of looking forward to him doing something stupid and getting that giant head of his pounded down in size a bit, but this'll be good as well. So, will we be seeing any Draco/Sevvie action soon? You left the perfect opening for it. I'm happy to hear we'll get to see the baby born and find out what happens with the family (I'm hoping for good news, the dark side rules after all). Okay, I did the stupid logging in thing just to leave this review (I hate the log-in system on this site), but I kinda had to. The whole Draco spying thing shocked me a bit. You know, it would be cool if you brought the twins into it, they're so cool. Also, any idea how many more chapters before your story is complete? Thanks for another great one by the way.
person Kaitlyn
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oops! I totally forgot Ron and Ginny died! I never really liked them so I guess I didn't take to much notice in their deaths!

So draco's a spy hmm... i don't feel to good about this at all! Spys never have happy endings. Not to much Prego Harry in this chapter =(. But Tom was all about the FLUFF again! He needs to torture someone fast if he wants me to still think of him as evil! Harry can help him. That would be really sexy. heehee they could do "it" in front of their victims and allow them no relief! Muhaha evil! I loved the Remus/Sirius smut and can't wait for Lucius to join in!
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I check everyday for updates. You're doing an amazing job with it. If only Severus had walked in and joined the two. (Hey a girl can dream can't she?!) Anyways, looking forward to the next update!

--- Dark Cabaret ---
person Danine
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh lovely, lovely! More please!
person anniea
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uh what was that last bit. me no speaka french. interesting!!! having draco be the spy. i'm loving this story though i don't know how i feel bout fenrir/harry someone please explain the chemistry betwixt them? update soon *kisses*
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Missed a chapter again. Damn. Have to do something with my comp already.
So Sev is finally on the Dark side! *Dances around the room like insane*
Sirius has been really cool.
person RheaSama
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore your story, and I certinly can't wait to read more. I'm always happy to see a slightly fluffier, and 'human' side of our dear Dark Lord.
I happily await more chapters, and though this is my first review, I am Rhea, age 20, stuck in the hellishly hot Texas~
- Rhea Clair