rate_review Reviews

Oh no! Harry almost got snacked on by a vampire!! Charlie you bastard! What were you thinking, trusting Bella like that??

Atleast the baby is ok.


And your sister is wrong. Snape has to be on the good side because it would make no sense, literarily speaking for Harry to be right about Snape for all 6 books. If he didn't kill Dumbledore he would have been dead himself. Dumbledore knew he had to die if Draco and Snape were to be saved and wouldn't have had it any other way. Plus, Rowling wouldn't have put in that whole thing about mind reading and communication if it wouldn't be coming back to play in the story during later chapters. Of course, in a month we'll all know either way. ^^

DAMN! Dumbledore's there, poor Harry, now the real brainwashing starts. Hopefully Harry's a good enough actor to get through (definitely looking forward to the interior monologue). At least Tom knows where he is now, and will no doubt be coming to the rescue before too long. If Charlie wasn't bad enough to deserve severe pain before, he difinitely is now. He saved Harry from his horrible circumstances, yeah right, and WHEN did he become anything resembling a boyfriend! Harry's right, he is delusional. Any slight hope they may have had of getting Harry on their side (if there was any, which I doubt) definitely disappeared with the attitudes being shown. By the way, LOVED Bella torture, she so deserves it. Maybe she should have thought of the 'don't touch the Dark Lord's things' rule a little earlier.

I definitely like this story. One, it's a well written and executed story. Secondly I got a kick out of the names you picked for the baby. My two year old son is named Logan Alexander, so I thought that was great. Kudos on a great story. Looking forward to more updates.

ARGH! You are simply driving me crazy with curiosity, you had better update soon. You're a damned good writer but you have an unhealthy nac for cliffies. How will Harry get back to Tom and the others?? Update soon pleasepleaseplease...!

*glare* You evil, evil person leaving Harry in the hands of a madman aka Dumbledore. I hope you save him soon.

Your story is so cute. I love it very much.I thought I would save up till the last chapter is out but couldn't.Can't wait tho see the next chapter.

Ah, and when Charlie said to Harry that people would pay top dollar for him.Wouldn't it be better and more suit if it were "galleleon" instead of "dollar" ^^

Both chapters were brilliant. Loved every word. Poor Harry though. Well really poor Tom. Harry's gonna end up running into Dumbles isnt he? For this fic i'd definitely say good Snape. Wouldnt make sense to be bad after all that. And he's swore his loyalty so either he's an idiot and does something to harry or he trys to betray them and dies. I'd keep Snape good in this. and keep him with Draco. Loved the bit where Remus kissed Bella as Luc. Priceless.

Poor Harry. Tom will find him. I liked how he got Bella!

Oh no! *shields eyes from mad twinkle* Dumbles! What did Harry do to deserve that! And yes; I certainly like his inner monologue ;D
I hope you update again soon. I love this story!

Uh oh! Someone is in some big doo-doo!