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by lazycrazykitten

person Jan
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gods! Charlie is very delusional or he's insane. As for Dumbadore, well I can't wait to see what Tom has in store for him. I am hoping that Bill and the Twin's help Harry out when the time comes.

Glad to see that things are going well with Severus and Draco. Hope that potion works out, can't wait to see how a baby would look with the mix of Sirius, Remus and Lucius together.
person Henki8
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is keep dreaming Blondie......he's going to get himself killed one of these days
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I LOVE the twins! That confusion tactic was brilliant, and just what I can picture them doing. I'm glad Bill has more sense than the rest of the group as well, I see possible allies for Harry here. I notice that for a group that CLAIMS to be so concerned for Harry's welfare, the thought never even occured to a single one of them (besides the Twins and Bill) to ask Harry what he wanted. Dumblefuck was going to either 'have Harry get rid of the baby' (a.k.a. 'make him terminate it') or else 'allow' (a.k.a. force) Harry to keep his child. I realize Harry wants the baby, but what if he WERE an actual abuse victim like they think? Then here they'd be compounding it by deciding for him whether he should carry the baby or not. Fortunately most actual rape victims aren't treated that way (though many, due to circumstances, unfortunately are). Poor, poor Harry, I feel SO sorry for him. Surely even a minor would have SOME rights over their own body, even in the wizarding world, but they seem determined to ignore that fact in the case of their weapon. Don't even get me started on Charlie though, or I just may have to list out 101 ways he should die (all increasingly slow and painful), and if that delusional f-ing prat hurts the baby, I WILL make that list. Okay, not really, but I will be thinking of it. I can't wait for the next update, at least I know they won't harm Harry. Physically anyway.
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH, it just occured to me. Dumbles intends to make Harry start fighting against Voldemort within a couple months. That means they will have no choice but to give him a......wait for it.......WAND! They are SO screwed. After all, they probably still think he doesn't do magic, and therefore will have to start training him right away, and will assume that he's harmless. Besides, do they honestly think they'll just immediately have a perfect little weapon all ready to go out and fight the Dark Lord on command? I know, I know, the answer is yes, because they think the 'poor boy' is brainwashed and will surely see the error of his ways, since they've been SO kind and considerate towards him after all. Can you see me rolling my eyes?
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So much for Doctor/Patient confidentiality. Of course, maybe healers don't abide by such a thing? Of course the more likely culpret is that Harry "the victim" is their captive and prisoners have no rights. The bitch!

Hehehe. The weaselys are stupid and incredibly dellusional. I hope Fred and George defect and help Harry escape. 0:) Keep up the good work!@
person Henki8
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm so imagining Lucy snapping his fingers right about here: "...So step off of it bitch!
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, will the dark side be using the Mauraders old pathways into the castle to retrieve Harry? Or perhaps some other means?

Hehehe, I love this story. ^^ Plus another threesome in this chapter! <3 You spoil us.
person Henki8
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Urrg all the Weasel scenes made me really sick, don't even know how you manage to make the light side so bleeding fucked in their head and annoying.....
person windlg84
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
person akume
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sorry for not reviewing sooner. I've kinda been busy. Anyway, I'm back and I must say your story keeps me on my toes. I never know what's going to happen next. With that said I hope you add more chapter soon. Bye now.