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for Dark Gifts

by lazycrazykitten

person Bellixies
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!
I LOVED IT1!

THANK YOU SO MUCH
person mihel
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For your story "Dark Gifts" it was awesome and i was wondering if you are going to make a sequel?
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is really really really good!!!!! i love it!!!! good job!!
person Skylab01
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!! I absolutely love it! XD I hope you get told this all the time because I'm gunna check your other stories! Keep writting awesome stories!! XD Luv Aurkai
person nyx0774
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
person LSD
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this thank you sooo so much for writing it. xx please don't stop writing it would be such a waste of talent.
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
REREAD IT AND I THINK IT NEEDS A SEQUEL!
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this! Awesome!! K
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think that this sentence could use some work.

"Lucius Malfoy is a really powerful and really rich man and is currently really, really angry"

There are much better ways to emphasize than by saying "really" over and over again. Just a thought :).
person dibhuman
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thankyou god he was castrated!!