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for Dark Gifts

by lazycrazykitten

schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Dumbledork is dead (as my mother says "when you assume you make an ass out of you and me" or something like that), Bill and the twins have gone dark, the snake did its job, Harry and Tom are together again, and we have CHARLIE TORTURE coming up. He so deserves it, after what he tried to pull, hopefully Tom will show him what the words 'Dark Lord' really mean. Now I mention it, will we see Bella torture again? In short, all is right with the world.
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ding dong the old mans dead, witch old man? The bearded man. Ding Dong the creapy old mans dead.

YAY Tom and Harry are together again Charlie is going to be tortured to death (hopefully many long years of tourture are ahead of him) Dumbledor is D.E.A.D and all if right with this fiction. CELERBREAT GOOD TIMES COME ON!!

Looking forward to your next chapter I honestly dont know if Id would prefer to see a mushy reunion chapter, or a revenge against the insane bitch, and the retated red head. Im sure it will be great either way
person SweetGirl
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this story
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was good! I'm so happy they saved Harry!
Hoo-Rah! ^^
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm can't wait to see the torture of Weasley. Also Harry and Voldie's baby!! Also I think it was funny that Lavender just happened to be in front of everyone, right where Harry could see her. Stupid prat! She shouldn't have messed with Mr. Potter.
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Dumbledore's dead! I'm glad that you decided that Bill and the twins will join Harry and Tom. I've always liked them. I also can't wait for some Charlie torture and I would also like to see some more Bellabitch torture. You know, you can always pair the twins up with Angelina and Katie or you could do what some of the other authors do and just team them up together.
person misslala
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry a cold blooded killer? Wow. I wasn't expecting that, even with the little bint's antics.
person Faschmer
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this was so great, your so great... And I'm rambling, but it was soo great and OMG. Okay taking a breath, anyways this chapter was way beyond my expectations. And you killed Dumbledore and Lavender Brown, could it get any better =) Well, if you kill Charlie too, but that will without doubt happen soon. So to sum it up: great, good work, keep going, and can't wait ^^
person Selera
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. Thank you.. but it so fits.. especially with what you just had Charlie do to poor Harry.
person Kaitlyn
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DUMBLES IS DEAD! DUMBLES IS DEAD!! YIPPEE!!! THANK GOODNESS!!!!
Lavender is dead! thank gods i hated that little !
not much i have to say about this chapter, except Finally!
Gosh Tom i mean you took forever to propose and you choose then to do it!
i can't blame him though. Can't wait for the Charlie torture and reunion sex!