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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Much better chapter than what you started out with! You should really rewrite the first few. Good sex scene.
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I AM SO HAPPY THAT TOM GOT HARRY BACK AND THAT CHARLIE WILL GET WHAT IS COMING TO HIM!!!
WELL, HOPE TO BE READING THAT SOON !
WELL, HOPE TO BE READING THAT SOON !
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHO IS THIS? AND WHY ARE YOU READING THIS IF YOU THINK THAT AND IT IS A STORY THAT IS FUN AND IF YOU SAID YOU READ IT OFF AND ON YOU WOULD HAVE SEEN THAT MOLLY DOES NOT CARE THAT HARRY IS PREGNANT WITH TOM'S BABY AND THAT THEY ALL THINK THAT TOM HAS SEXUALLY ABUSED HARRY AND THAT HE SHOULD BE ON THEIR SIDE AND NOT WITH TOM WHO LOVES HIM.
WHEN IN TRUTH HARRY WAS RAISED TO PLEASE TOM AND TO BE HIS MATE, NOTHING IS MORE IMPORTANT THEN THAT!!
IF ALL YOU HAVE TO SAY IS BAD THEN I FEEL YOU SHOULD NOT READ IT ANY MORE!!
WHEN IN TRUTH HARRY WAS RAISED TO PLEASE TOM AND TO BE HIS MATE, NOTHING IS MORE IMPORTANT THEN THAT!!
IF ALL YOU HAVE TO SAY IS BAD THEN I FEEL YOU SHOULD NOT READ IT ANY MORE!!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the "Order of the Fried Chicken". Death Eater
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes yes yes yes yes! dumblefuck is dead! finally! and i'm so glad the charlie is not going to harm harry again. i'm also glad to see that the twins and bill have officially defected. we really need to give that little silver snake a name. you know since it saved harry from being raped. update soon. i really don't want the story to end but i guess all good things must come to an end. *sniffles and kisses*
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HaHa, You would think Dumbles would never assume about who is on what side, since he lost Sev, Sirius, Remus, and gained and lost Draco.
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are definitelly getting better at this point.
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
does little happy dance, charlie gonna get toruted, charlie gonna get toruted. he he yay. Love Bill and the twins by the way, timely arrivals or what. Dumbles is dead, and i've never liked Lavender. So big thumbs up glad the reason for the snake not helping Harry has been revealed. Very cool cant wait to see the baby.
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Burst out in evil laugher.* LAVENDER!! HE-KILLED-LAVENDER!! *Evil cackling.* Oh, dear bloody GOD, That was so evilly Brilliant!!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. i can't wait to read the last chapter...........Jet