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for Dark Gifts

by lazycrazykitten

schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Harry is back and the baby is coming! A girl or a boy I wonder? Update soon!
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ouchy, that does sound painfull. I cant wait to read the last two chapters, but it will also make me sad since i have enjoyed reading it so much. Good work on the chapter.
person Jan
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! I loved that Harry castrated Charlie, love the reaction from everyone, couldn't stop laughing.

Please update soon. I must have the next chapter.
person anniea
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
he cut it off..... he cut little charlie off........you don't wanna know. wait a second you used MY IDEA! i was gonna say poor poor charlie but then i remembered that i said that charlie should be castrated! then i remembered that i actually wrote what i thought . *shrieks* you used my idea even if you didn't in a way you DID! (insane ramblings again) update soon *kisses*
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter!
I can't wait for Harry's Baby! Hoo-Rah! *throws confetti*
person Kaitlyn
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THE BABY'S ALMOST HERE!
heehee. i was laughing due to the irony of Charlie's death! Death by castaration! i don't think that's how its spelt but i was never good at spelling!
im so sad its almost over!
No more hot Tom/Harry sex scenes, no more prego Harry! im gonna cry!
please! please say you'll write another Tom/Harry story! even a oneshot!
i love your writing!
person poohbear74
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO PROBLEM I HATE PEOPLE WHO READ A STORY AND DO NOT GET WHAT THE WRITER IS TRYING TO GET ACROSS TO THE READER AND WHAT THEY ARE TRYING TO SAY, AND THEN TELL THEM HOW MUCH THEY HATE THEIR STORY THAT CAN MAKE A WRITER WHO IS JUST STARTING OUT ATOP AND THEIR STORY MAYBE REALLY REALLY GREAT BUT THEY GET A FLAMER AND IT DISCOURAGE THEM AND THEY STOP FOR GOOD AND NEVER WRITE AGAIN THAT WOULD BE A WASTE OF THAT PERSONS GIFTS.

I LOVE HOW YOU GAVE CHARLIE WHAT WAS COMING TO HIM AND THEN SOME!!!!
person Faschmer
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, I was just in shock I think :p Thank you thank you thank you for castrating Charlie... Muhahahah... Really loved the scene where Remus, Sirius, Lucius, Snape and Draco all were wincing when they thought about the castration. So funny ^^ Hormonal Harry is so much fun, Tom must have gone abslutely bonkers :p
person Aalto
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! You promised the birth would be in this chapter! Naughty author. Wensday huh...? Well I hope I can wait.
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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