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for Dark Gifts

by lazycrazykitten

schedule April 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Is is just me or are all the punctuation replaced with question marks?

person Calamity
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this! read it a dozen times over the years lol
person Elizabeth
schedule April 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It's hilarious! My family thinks I've gone mental because of the laughter coming out of my room.
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this story is wonderful, BUT I have a slight nitpick, you're not using the right versions of words, you're using you are where it should be Your, also you're using a possessive term their which would be used like: it's their ball, instead of the word meaning a place which is there, and similar other grammar issues, overall though, the story is very good!
person Ellie
schedule July 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It would be Lord and Death Eater that's how it is in the book and its Fawkes there's no l in the name... Watch out for run on sentence use those commas and ellipse... Sorry if i seam a tab bossy...
schedule April 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
;-; I loved this story!!! Thank you :D I had so much fun reading it. Thank you thank you. ^_^
person Cheesesticks
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Someone actually finished an INTERESTING fic on this site! Woot woot!
person moonstar
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
To put it simply, this story it the best I have read.
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, I
person Fargen
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I ask the permission to translation.
Translation will be on Russian.
While 5 heads are translated and checked up.

Email Fargen@rambler.ru