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That was a lovely lemony-fresh shower. And waking up in bed to find Snape draped all over you...wow. There's a nice thought! He'll have to watch what he's thinking, won't he? She'll know! Well, I'm looking forward to all kinds of complications ahead, not to mention more lemons...

Oops,Severus, hope he hasn't seriously hurt her! I'm intrigued by Marie - I want to know what she thinks of having a life outside the experimental lab. Has she ever known human relationships before or is it all new to her? Update soon.

Liking your story so far. Wish your chapters were just a little bit longer, but I will take what I can get. Guess this is sort of Harry Potter crossed with x-men. It seems Marie must have quite a few powers. What is she going to think of Severus when she wakes up? Will she realise that he didn't know it was her when he was banging her head off the floor? What will she think when she finds out that he really isn't like her, and that he is a wizard? I am really looking forward to finding out all the answers to my questions. Please update very soon!
Sansa

I like the connection they have, though I get the feeling Severus is going to try and resist it. He has got his work cut out now, with Voldemort after her as well. Do keep updating; all kinds of interesting stuff could happen here.

Ooh, telekinesis, exciting. Carrie comes to Hogwarts! Poor Marie, though, she's had no life. And now Malfoy and the Death Eaters are involved. I await the next chapter with interest.

your story shows great potential I shall look forward to seeing more

5 stars for originality good luck

Aha, so she's not your common or garden witch then? Severus finds a stunning waif in the forest...what could possibly happen? Heh heh. Let us know soon.

it's written well, not enough yet to tell if it will be a good story or not, but you have my interest. Please update soon.