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for Dangling

by spikespetslayer

schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM

The pain was excruciating and immediate. She wanted to scream but the spell was still upon her so she caught her bottom lip between her teeth and bit down until she tasted blood in her mouth. His lips were on her throat and trailing to the soft spot under her ear.
person ig0222
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WILL YOU MAKE ANOTHER SEQUEL YOU CAN'T LEAVE THINGS HERE,PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER ONE AT LEAST ONE LAST
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, simply awesome. I'd love a sequel ;)
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! That was very good. I'm sorry to see this story is complete. I would love to see this turn into a story.
person Rosamund
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, this could be the end, but it could also continue...what are you going to do ;) please write more!
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was intense but so good and you should write more if you want.