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by spikespetslayer

schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a hot story
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your Draco is fairly unique, in my experience. Humanized but still edgy. I like how quickly he's willing to open up, to a certain extent, to Hermione. I take it you believe he would trust her basic integrity a bit more than he would, say, Harry...or Ron.

I also like the intimacy you give these two characters. Taking them immediately to private interaction where they can decide how much to reveal to each other without the complications of external conditioning and expectations. They meet as true equals--more so than many pairings in the HP universe.

Great to read your intrepid use of graphic sexual terms and situations. In so much het fanfiction euphemisms crop up. This is much more erotic. I definately like!

I think I'm here from Crack_Broom in case you're wondering. One of your fics was recced this month. I believe it was a long WIP fic. Haven't read it yet, but just might, even though I usually shy away from WIP's.

Thanks for making your stories accessable!
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Rosamund
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very hot!!!
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice.
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Also amazing. :) You're a great writer, keep it up!
person JaynaM
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was soo good!!

Jayna
xxx
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Spikespetslayer, Very nice!!!! I look forward to more short stories from You! Lady Jerrillith