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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello so your looking for a beta. Just what kind are you looking for, if I may ask. I have been told I am not bad at paragraph struchuring, thou I am a new one at it. I looked at this story you are writing and like it. So if you want I can give it a test try your choice.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering did this story get adopped?
Or is there at least other stories like this some where?
I would really like to know this. This is a great story and great idea. But if it were up to me i would add just one more slytherin .... Severus Snape.
Ewe
Or is there at least other stories like this some where?
I would really like to know this. This is a great story and great idea. But if it were up to me i would add just one more slytherin .... Severus Snape.
Ewe
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love to continue this fiction but I'm busy right now so if I post it I will sent the URL to you. Do you mind if I re-write the first chapter?
Oh, bu the way my e-mail is furin_a@hotmail.com
you can send your answer or anything anytime.
Oh, bu the way my e-mail is furin_a@hotmail.com
you can send your answer or anything anytime.
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sounds good.
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like so far,I can't wait for more.
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
seems pretty good so far, update soon!
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. Harry and dom Slytherins - PERFECT. I hope you updete soon. Cant't wait for another chapter. Hope Sev will show up soon.
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, i really wish i could get into this story, but the writing is horrible! i'm sorry. pllllease get a beta, use more paragraphs, develop your characters, develop a plot. i hope to see this reposted at some point as a presentable story =/ i'm truly sorry i'm not able to get into it. goodluck.
ps: i don't mean this to be a flame, so please don't take it as one. just offering some constructive criticism.
ps: i don't mean this to be a flame, so please don't take it as one. just offering some constructive criticism.
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story.... I really like it.... Ok you admitted you need a beta and I hate to say it but you do... If you want I would like to offer my services... Needing a beta isn't a bad thing... In fact I think everyone should have a beta because when you write something you tend to skip over the mistakes because you know what they are supposed to be and you mind ignores what they actually are....That being said.... I can't wait for you're next update.