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for Big Chicago

by Samaelthekind

schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is totally fantastic. Completely original, and beautifully written. I really love it, and I can't wait to read more. Thank you very much for sharing this.
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 14!
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't wait on talking about Blaise tooo long. Gotta feeling he is going to be a problem! Sooo need chapter 14!
person Mitamay
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sure hope Draco doesn't get stupid and try to go back to Blaise...if I were him, I'd use the number he gave me and sic Harry on his ass! I can only hope! EM
person AmyHavok
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH Please....please....please...UPDATE SOON!!!! That is some cliff hanger! No fair....
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i didnt see him coming.
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 13! Though I was a bit worried about the interaction between Blaise and Draco. Hope it was all an act for Draco. Don't think Harry would like being cheated on. Especially not with the guy who set Draco up the first time.
person jatoriew
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was an evil cliffie! You have to update soon after that! I really liked this chapter, even if Harry didn't show up until the end. I like the interactions between Ron and Draco. It's really funny and I like how they seem to be forming a kind of friendship. It would be nice if by the end of this story it gets to a point where Ron would be willing to protect/accompany Draco without doing it just as a favor to Harry. I can't wait to see what happens next. Harry's finally home. I'm so glad. Please update soon ^__^
person ChaosProphet
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
beautiful as always. great blend of social commentary (i cant stand the lobotomy-in-a-box or the corporate-owned press either), plot advancement (are my reader instincts heading in the right direction with 'harry black' paying zabini a visit?), and sex. sex-cliffies are evil, but you have me wanting the next chapter the way drake wants harry. please samayel, i need it and i need it bad!!! oh, and 'big chicago' is officially my favorite H/D fic; ive never really liked the pairing, but you add such detail in the plot and character development that i cant help but love the relationship that is unfolding. i dont know what im looking forward to more - the explosive sex between harry and drake or the explosion of violence between harry and zabini.
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 12! I hope no one saw anything! That prison job was sloppy. "Black" should have been listed as killed or something.