AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Big Chicago

by Samaelthekind

schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was definitely one of the best AU stories that I have ever read. Samayel is one author that I would highly recommend to anyone I know who enjoys reading Harry Potter fanfiction.
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo for Bella! Especially a hot, sexy, crazy, murderous Bellatrix. :) The scene with Ron and Hermione was too hilarious. And I totally was grinning during Drake's musings about if oral sex is dominant or submissive. ;) Are we going to be able to call him Draco soon? Great job.
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 34!!!
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. This is super interesting and is really enjoyable so far. I was a bit shocked at the change to third person at first, but since you are doing it more often now, it is definitley "fitting" better. I suppose to talk about this latest chapter, I really enjoyed that Luna bit there. :D I'm a bit surprised that you are still on Blaise, and that just makes so many openings for failure for the gang. Lucius, Riddle, the cops, and Blaise's mother... I'm glad they seem to be on top of most of them though, even if they don't think of Blaise being a problem anymore. Back to the story at large, yeah there are a few times where Drake's character makes me cringe a bit, the cross dressing was an interesting addition, and I like what you've done with the names for everyone. I'm kind of wondering if Drake will assume the name of Draco sometime in the future. That'd be nice, since I've already had to fix Draco's name a couple times in this little review, lol. I love Ron, and Hermione is just so adorable. Drake is definitely interesting, and I've enjoyed the little takes on American culture that you've fitted into this, mostly the sarcastic nature in which to approach American culture with Drake's perspective. I love dangerous Harry here, especially when he was back in the prison. :) This is a fantastic story. You've done a great job at this AU. Looking forward to more.
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol it seems like someone's been playing guitar hero.
or is it me that played too much?
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 33!!!
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 32!!! Harry is in danger of getting caught!
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 31!!!
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My God, I am so addicted to this story. I'm really liking the development of the story, as well as Dee's personal development, but um, one request?? Bring the sexy back?!!!!
person graballz
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*bows down* I'm still not worthy...

Seriously, you know that you're the God of Slash, right? As I've said before, this story is SO fucking amazing and I do *happy dances* all over my room when there's a new chapter! (and then I read said chapter at least three times before I'm finally satisfied!)

It's probably a very good thing that Harry wasn't patched in to Draco's mic, because he probably would've come through and killed Zabini just on principle when he heard the 'noises'!!! (Not that I would've minded, but this is definitely much more of a 'poetic justice' way...)

And I absolutely adore both Draco and Harry in this...I love you!!! I love this story!!! Can't wait for an update!!!