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by Samaelthekind

schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, I am so impatient for this story. I am not a big HP fan but I am of your writing. Your characters are always so human. Not exaggeratedly good nor evil but just "plain folks" as they say. You always present your character swith such pathos and such honesty that I always look forward to reading your work even when it deals with subjects that are not at all appealing. It appears, to me anyway, that you are always striving to improve your writing skills and I applaud that.
Please keep up the excellent work and Thanks!
person shevien
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so damn good! I got shivers myself!
(For some reasonI thought of James Bond
when Harry said his name:p)Next time...

person misslala
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Such ferocious intensity! I am curious as to why Harry is a Black, but I assume that is just part of the AU since Draco is Drake :P OR, he was raised by the Blacks? Hrm, lots of questions. And why did he protect Dee rather than make him really suck him off - he isn't quite what I expected but I like it. I mean, well I thought he was going to be intense, he always is when you write him, but that was brilliant and I found myself completely immersed in Drake's emotions regarding what he saw, that is brilliant!

I wonder if this will be a comedy, as the other works have been or is there a tragedy lurking in you? I still have to finish "All I Ever Wanted" lol I get sidetracked with my own writing, lol Oh well, I have enjoyed this and can't wait for more!
person misslala
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh this is refreshing! :) I am looking forward to reading more, you are such a wonderful writer, just having the characters makes the story worth the read when one crafts the tale so seamlessly as you do :) I was wondering when your next epic would begin!
person em7117
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person rafiq
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah. Another story by Samayel. Plus it is set in Chicago where I live.
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! It's a wonderful story! I can't see how Harry will fit into it yet, but I can't wait!... Really... I can't wait... update, por favor.
person shevien
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know, I am actually trying to writte a prison AU fic myself on my drive (got 3 chaps)!
But I had to check this out.
*sigh* and with one chapter you made mine seem...*sigh*
I will still do it or maybe turn it into a original (wont be that hard.)
Anway, THIS IS SO INTRIGUING, can't wait for chapter 2!!!
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its really good!!
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more. I can't wait to see how Harry meets up with Draco. What will happen with his parents?? Update soon.