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by Samaelthekind

schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just who is Mr. Black? I soooo need chapter 4!
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it.
person misslala
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Ok, so my mind is going in overdrive, I want to know what Harry really is, a cop, a mob boss - what is his reason for going inside and then taking Draco away from it all like a Knight in Shining Armour. I am guessing it has something to do with his assistance, but whatever it is, Harry has a lot of pull! :) Which, I like. I cannnot wait for more of this, I am hooked! I even had my husband send me the chapter at work so I could read it, LOL I know, horrible right, but still that is how much I am enjoying this story. I am hoping that the car waiting was our dear and beloved Ron Weasley. That would serious just put the icing on the cake and my god - I can't wait, LOL So many wondrous things are running through my mind, but only you, dear God of this tale, will be able to reveal all :) Great writing as always and I look forward to more.
person jatoriew
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow great chapter. I'm so glad Harry turned out to be a good guy. I wonder how he ended up in the prison. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've fallen in love with this story [just like i love your other work!]
I love how your characterization of draco and of harry.

& strangely enough....my name is dee.
person graballz
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1--OH MY GOD, YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!! YESSSSSS!!!!!!! *excited* I can't tell you how happy I am to see your name up here again! This is too cool!

Oh wow, this is crazy! Flint, huh? Bastard. Theo...that sucks. Blaise is an arse, and I CAN NOT wait to see where Harry comes into play! Too cool!

person graballz
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2--Oh wow...I have to ask about HOW you can portray the inside of a prison so...accurately? I guess that's the best word, but bloody fucking hell, man! This is raw!

Oh my god! Oh My God! OH MY GOD!!! It's HARRY! HOLY SHIT! FOUR ON ONE??? godDAMN!

HOLY SHIT!!!!!! Whoa....wait, what? Oh wow! Harry Black? Hmmmm, what happened to Potter? I know, I know, we'll find out later! Can't wait for more!
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soooo need chapter 3! Harry is now in charge! And Draco only has 2 more months. Hmmm.
person rafiq
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kick ass Harry. Can't wait to see his character develop. I think he is going to be someone entirely different than what he initially appears to be.
person jatoriew
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start. This story is really interesting. I was surprised when Harry showed up at the prison because I assumed Draco would meet him after he was released, but I really like how things turned out. I really want to hear Harry's story and find out how he ended up in jail. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!