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for Big Chicago

by Samaelthekind

person ChaosProphet
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that cliffie was pure evil. i feel bereft as a reader! seriously tho, the way you have built this plot, the backstory and vivid details of the present, has made for an amazing read. update soon!
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! That is pure evil. You can't just leave it there. *holds up two fingers* Update or the bunny gets it! *holds up gun/hand* Oh I'll do it....
person misslala
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was cruel to leave it off there! LOL He walks in listening to choppy piano and then laughs. How, mysterious of him! LOL I can't wait for more, love, keep up the great work. I absoluetely adore Drake's persona :) I especially look forward to finding out more about Harry Black...
person rafiq
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes. Now we find out just who Harry Black really is and what he wants.
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...I love the ending. That was funny.
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's about time! Thanks for updating, and for brining Harry back. You truly have me on the edge of my seat, the way you write. You have my constant praise for creating a beacon of literary hope to this ever declining world of horrible metaphors, and repetative imagery. PS are you a muscian? I happen to be a music major( violin preformance) , and your repitoire is very distinguished. For you, a standing ovation!
person cinque
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo love this fic. It
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, I love it!! Who is Harry Black?? I so can't wait to find out.
person shevien
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man this is so intriguing. Mr Black is killing me with
his mysteries!
person Darkless
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, really nice beginning. Draco's life is so hopeless and demeaning. Poor little lostling. Then Harry steps in and hope springs to life again, only to come crashing down and Draco is left wondering if he's just jumped from one frying pan to another, let alone into the fire. Can't wait for more. Go you!