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by Samaelthekind

person Leentjef
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow ververy good story i really liked it
keep going and post soooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
person ChaosProphet
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome, as always. snape was perfectly in character, although the mental image of him golfing made me laugh hysterically. poor drake, the way you write his inner monologue really makes his stress, anxiety, and fears pop thru the words and drags the reader in. i cant wait for the next chapter, please write more!!!!!!
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soooo second that prayer! I need chapter 7!
person Mitamay
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another deep and rich fic! I really enjoyed 'Redeem Me', and this one is so full if mystery, I can't help but want to find out more about Harry's past. You've reeled me in now, so give me more bait! (i.e. updates!) ^_- EM
person jatoriew
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I really like this story and the parrallels you've made between this story and the canon hp universe. I'm glad to finally see Harry and Draco interact out of prison. I love your characterization of Draco, Harry, and Snape. Draco's thoughts and reactions are very believable considering what he's been through. Good work ^__^ Update soon!
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you update! Another wonderful chapter! I love how you describe Harry "he’s a hit-man with the soul of a poet". Draco and Harry interaction was perfect! I can not wait for the next update.
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm really enjoying your story. I can't wait to read what happens next. I hope Drake can learn to trust Harry. Drake needs someone like Harry that will look after him and help him get healthy.
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this.
person Darkless
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, now the fun begins. I'm totally loving this unrepentant 'Drag Queen' Dee. "That's who I am, so there!"
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6! Maybe Harry will take Draco shopping. Bet Draco would like some new clothes!