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for Big Chicago

by Samaelthekind

schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. You are amazing with your views and insight. I love them. Your one line ... 'I guess it
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another great chapter! xD I love how you went indept about Chicago and take time to explain things. It give the feeling that you're there and make reading more enjoyable. I can't wait for more interaction between Harry and Draco. Harry just so sweet.
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soooo need chapter 8!
person Leentjef
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow very very good kep going and post soon
bye bye
person shevien
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"At the moment, I
person Darkless
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...The Phoenix Corporation? Dude, I got shades of MacGyver with that, you know; The Phoenix Foundation? While he did do troubleshooting and infiltration for benevolent reasons, old Mac was never as badass as your Harry! Whoohoo!

Ah, 'Drake' is rediscovering all the sybaritic pleasures of high-end living...it's all the little things that you miss the most. Everything about hooking-up with Harry is turning out to be quality, including his treatment of poor, gun-shy Drake. He deserves some pampering anyway. Drake has fallen, and fallen hard. Well, we all know that they are both in very good hands, eh Sam? *wink*

Wow, you must really like Chicago, whether you live there or have only visited, judging from the wealth of information (or just a really good researcher, hehe). I've heard the winters are damn bitter from the damp cold of the lake. Brrrrrr.
person AmyHavok
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another really cool chapter...i love draco,he is so cool yet so naive in some weird way. But he also shows moments when (using Harry's words) you can see great "potential".... love it all. update soon please...
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I am so loving your story. What a wonderful story of second chances and rebirth of the human soul. Very well done!
person misslala
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't figure out where I want to review, LOL I like hex because you reply there! LOL *I am a hyper mess, don't mind me.* Brilliant as always, :)
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story definately wanna hear more