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for A Matter of Circumstance

by Ms_Figg

person Darkless
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! It started out as a promising lark, what with the interfering 'Gods' and whatnot...then you start noticing that it's actually well written; plot and execution. I'm quite enjoying the serious undertone. It'e not just another Jerry Springer wannabe, with everybody cheating on everyone else (although I just loved Harry's little snippet with Draco, one of my fave pairings...gotta love that slash!) and the real relationships, rocky or otherwise, that have developed make for a very entertaning story. Snape, no matter how evil he may come across, is no coward and always, always, does what is needed.
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well severus is screwed with Hera involved. Enjoyed the chapter and story and look foward to more.
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person phistolemon
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like how this story is developing :D
gladly, it didn't come to a real fiasco when ron heard about hermione's lover and it being snape.
I thought he'd explode or something when he heard it was snape's child.. but gladly, with the help of the gods
he managed to stay calm ;) lol. but it's so sweet of him to help her still... hadn't expected that either, really.
that he and hermione spent one more night was rather surprising to me, too, and I felt sorry for severus as he
saw them together.. that hurt him, didn't it? but well.. I think it was necesarry for him to see it,
otherwise he wouldn't realize what he secretly feels for her *smirk*

now he left her way too early :P haha, too bad. one might have expected that he would take her,
just to show her that he was more capable than ron and all that jazz... but hear, hear.. the wizard
is actually too hurt to go his usual way..
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
phistolemon: I'm not sure if seeing Ron and Hermione together hurt Snape's heart or his ego. And Ron definitely needed some supernatural help to be so...understanding. lol. I didn't see any other way to get him to act...well...sweet in this situation. It's out of character for Ron not to blow up,..at least in fanfiction so I had to use some outside influences. Now it's time for them to deal with each other without the gods playing chess with them for their own self-gratification. I could have had Severus bed Hermione, but after he gave her that account and Hermione already had "thank you" sex with Ron...I thought"Nah. Too much, too soon." Both of them need time to think a bit more since the situation has dramatically changed. By changing Severus' approach to Hermione I sort of illustrated that, I think. I hope. Anyway, glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for commenting.
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn of events. I hope things work out for Hermione and Severus and he comes to his senses.

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person phistolemon
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe, well I'm very curious what'll happen next, now without the gods and all..
since severus had shown some jealousy I'm hoping there's more he feels!


ps:
hope you're feeling better btw!
*hugs and now shuts up* lol
person pittwitch
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Merlin's hairy balls woman, I need to see Zeus zapping someone, anyone! LOL - Poor Hermes. Thanks for sharing, Pitt
person crinna
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am thoroughly enjoying this fic. one would think Hermione has a sympathetic ally in Hera. Hera loves jilted mothers.
i cant wait to See what mischief Eris has in store for us. thank you for updating so regularly. your productivity is astounding.