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by ryzmah

person bean1498
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I loved that! Very funny and a very surprising twist. :) Thank you for sharing.
person kazfeist
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this story would be GREAT expanded! I don't think I've seen one where Hermione's pregnancy is one of 'advanced maternal age'. Though in the wizarding world, she's probably the equivalent of a 35-year-old. What a neat idea! :D
person Mari
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahahah that was soo cool haha i loved it ^_^
person seventh
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, that was awesome.
person sapphire1
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! When I first starting read I thought it was the usually she gets knocked up oh! how do I tell him story. This had me in stitches I laughed so hard I choked. I have got to stop snacking & drinking when I read because sometimes I get something so wonderfully unexpected it almost kills me. Great story. You have got 2 do aleast another chap I want 2 know how is Draco & family going 2 react.
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, having a baby at sixty? That is insane, but very creative. I like the way the story was written and you made it, thought short, very interesting. Hope to read some more of your writing soon.

-Leslie
person Kim
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo cute! You should consider continuing. I could just imagine Draco's reaction : )
person mmfcfa
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had to re-read it a couple of times before it finally sunk in. Great story idea. Totally unexpected! Appropriate title. I'm torn in whether to suggest that you continue it as a fully developed story or let it stay as it is 'cause it is wonderful as it is.
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very sneaky! First you mention Pomfrey, so we think she's in school. Then they're enjoying their time as a couple together, so we think they just got together. Then we find out they're married, and then you spring the grandma thing on us.
person kazfeist
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was charming! I can see a few more chapters, with them telling their children, and the birth....you should consider continuing it, hon! :D