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by AnasellaEmm

person tikigirl
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did an excellent job portraying Draco. I can't wait to see how the relationship progresses! Your knowledge about psychiatric healthcare is intriguing. Makes me wonder what you do for a living or if you have a family member with schizophrenia. Anyway, Keep it up, this story definitely has my interest!
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great Chapter. I think you portrayed Draco perfectly. I know it's not how he acted in school but since the war has past and the light side won and Draco was apart of that side, so it makes sence to me. I just can't picture him runing around and being a bastard anymore. The way you portrayed him is exactly how I thought he would act. So I comend you. You did an excellent job. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out.
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story looks like it is going to be amazing! I love it so far. And I think you did a wondeful job on Draco. With all the things he has seen and done I think it would have changed him quite a bit! Not to mention he is a prisioner in his own home with an ailing mother. Wonderful, I will have to keep my eyes open for the next chapter! Pretty please with Draco on top update soon!
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah dear, what can i say? UPDATE hun. we are all waiting for the next chapter, better make it quick. i really like the fact that you put efforts to describe every little details. great efforts! =) hurryyyy. and good luck, i'm sure it will be as great.
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I has a great plot. I don't think anyone has written one like this and if they have I haven't seen it. Yeah, I can't wait until you get to the part where Hermione goes to live with Draco. Oh course they are going to have issues with each other but I don't think Draco should act as childish as he is in the books and movies because it just wouldn't seem right. He knows Hermione is smart and very talented so he should be greatful that she is helping his mother. I'd like to see him act like an adult for once with a slip of childness every once in awhile. So, update soon. I'd really like to read the next chapter.
person Lamb_chopz
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh very good keep going!
person b0rn s0 awed
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting. I have to agree with the other reviewers, I've never read anything like this in this ship. Please do continue soon.
person Mel
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! I know it's only one chapter so far, but it's amazing. Keep up the good work!
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am reviewing to help you get motivated so please write a second chapter. I really want to see where you take this!
person Black Ruby
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic so far! Very realistic. You kept them all in character, which always makes the story. I can't tell you how many HG/DM fics that I have read that just blew it. All in all, great beginning to a story that I can't wait for the next chapter.