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lovelyyyyyy. lovely but short. update soon hun. =] i really can't wait. and i love it when they have conversations like that. keep up the good work. you know, i don't usually comment. but like i said, this story is awesome and i don't know but there's something about your writing style that got me hooked.

you know i loveeeee u!

oh and 2 chapters in such a short time? have i told you that you are wonderful? well, there you go.=]

I'm so glad that you have it basically all done and just have to write it and post it. It will help it come out faster. So I hope you get the next chapter soon. It's getting real good.

you have a very interesting plot.
i'm glad to have come acrossed it.
waiting for more.

I love in interaction with Draco and Narcissa, it's very touching. Please please please update soon, I'll be waiting!

awesome. just plain awesome. you know what i really like from you? your chapters are longer than the usual length. and that's just great.=] really, i can't wait for the next chapter. your characterizations of draco is good, but i think he should be nicer to his mom even though her situation is becoming a dull routine for him; it's still his mom and he cares so much about her. the interaction between draco and hermione is perfect. to be honest though, i think hermione should've known that narcissa wouldn't like people calling her mrs. malfoy, with all the traumas that she's gone through.. it's kind of natural and our hermione is good enough to figure that out no? anyways, it's just details. =] it's like i'm repeating myself but i absolutely love your fanfic so far and i love your style! your plot is wonderful and it reminds me of grey's anatomy so much! good thing 'cause i love that show. good job dear, and update soon!!

I love the way you portrayed Draco, although I think the bored tone when talking to his mom was a bit mean of him. But I suppose if he's been dealing with her for this long most of her conversations are the same old routine. Can we get some Hermione-Narcissa bonding in, and a small decrease in the Herm-Draco dislikes? Nothing huge, no sudden unexplainable attractions, but like a truce or some friendship or something? I think you're doing a great job with this fic, and I LOVE the long chaters! Keep up the awesome writing!

Very interesting story you've got going. D/H ships are my favorite for some odd reason and it's nice to see one that's well written and with proper spelling/grammar. Quite a few fics on here tend to fall into the "semi-illiterate" category, but yours thankfully does not. :) Keep it up and post again soon.

I like how you started off the story! Keep up the good work, and maybe Hermione can get Draco to smile

Somehow when I read the first chapter, I just knew that this Draco would be the exact way you portrayed him. Somewhat subdued, stoic (except for around his mother) and rather solemn. Excellent work, once again!

Update soon dearest! Can't wait for the next chapter!

O.K. You get points for the name Dr. Whore. LMAO You had me laughing in the middle of the night!

Very nice writing style and entertaining storyline. Looking forward to more.