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by AnasellaEmm

schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goodness. This story keeps getting better and better. Please please update soon!
person Ingeborg
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I love you. Can I wrap you up and keep you in my room? :P
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! But when are Malfoy and Hermione going to 'Get together' in the physical sense?......LOL. Draco needs to make love not have sex. You make this Hermione/Draco pairing VERY beleiveable!
person urakih88
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for teh new great chapter! Lovely choices of names too!

*three thumbs up*
person pickles87
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for letting me know you updated.
Awesome chapter.
Remind me - Does he know her idea on sex without marriage policy?
person Unknown
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter. Yes it was fluffy, but it was nice. I am very much looking forward to reading more. I also liked the fact that it had so many interesting facts in it. Like how Draco talked about Jannah. I always thought it was spelled Jenna and I liked the fact that I learned something new. I have been Muslim all my life and didn't know it was spelled that way. Thank you, for teaching me something. I also liked the mythology story. I took a class on Greek Mythology last fall, so I already knew the story. But I was happy to see it in there because I love mythology. Again, I really liked this chapter and I loved this story. Please continue.
person Liz
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like fluff. I really do; but there was also significant touches of melancholy, which I really like, over all good chapter!
person Cathey
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think you're doing a great job so far :D love the declaration of L O V E between these two, so expectedly unexpected in such a short time period =)

one thought while i was reading the last chapter, the part where Hermione and Draco walk into Narcissa's room to see if she's "ok", i dunno but "ok" doesn't fit into the story... maybe something like "fast asleep" or "soundly sleeping" ?

not good at fluffiness? lol, why don't you have reviewers and readers submit a part to your story, you can still edit it but if you dont have ideas for the lemons or limes, i'm pretty sure we can help you out ;]
person Kilalla
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love fluff!! like you dont even understand!! i am hopelessly romantic and i love fluff. lol

great chapter btw!!!!!!
Cissa's meltdown thing was kinda scary, im not gonna lie, that would be really hard to deal with you know?
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha House elf Talent Shows? Thats just toooo funny!!!! Hahaha. Man, Poor Draco had to endure that, hes much stronger than I am:P.
Great chapter, and yes it was quite fluffy, and drama and angst is better, or at least funner to read. Sometimes you can't avoid the fluffyness tho, so You're forgiven.
Shannon xoxox