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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Could you please update soon? I absolutely love this fic, and I'd really like to see more of this Charlie/Narcissa bit...Omgosh! You really need to update because half cliff-hangers are not my favourite endings. Grrr. ANYWAY! I've only noticed a few grammar mistakes all the way through the fic, so congrats on that. Kudos and such. I'm so done with this review and my ramblings. Please hurry and write more.
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! Absolutely love this fic. And it's cool that Jannah was what Draco chose to call the center of the maze. My name, Jannatun, derives from the word, actually. But anyway, continue writing! You're amazing!
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this, you made the characters so realistic! post another chapter soon
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww soo cute!! More soon
Jayna
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Jayna
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. It is so complex and different. However, I have
to worry where they can take this relationship.
Draco may have conditioned himself to his imprisoment at the manor. But it surely
would eventually come between them, that Hermione has free movement???
I wish to thank you for informing me of the updates, and look forward to reading more,
hopefully soon.
Best wishes,
to worry where they can take this relationship.
Draco may have conditioned himself to his imprisoment at the manor. But it surely
would eventually come between them, that Hermione has free movement???
I wish to thank you for informing me of the updates, and look forward to reading more,
hopefully soon.
Best wishes,
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(to paraphrase the last line:)that was the best chapter I've read in a long time!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I love how you incorportated the psychological nature into it. I love the whole right brain/left brain angle that you use to show the difference between these two characters. I hope you continue with this story. This past chapter was beautifully written. Thanks for writing a great story.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfection! They finally got it together! Thanks for the update. It gave me something else to think about while I wait for the book *wink*
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. A truly beautiful love scene. Will paitently wait for the next chapter, after I read Deathly Hallows.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh My gosh! That was wonderful! You wrote that so well! I loved hearing her analyze everything in her head like that, it was perfect!