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for Unexpected Places

by SnapesSweetheart

person Jen
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit confused... You said initally that Jasmine's mother was pureblood. Then in a later chapter you said someone must have found out her mother (Jasmine's) was a Muggle. Then you say Narcissa is the mother, thus implying she and Snape were in love at school yet Canon tells us Narcissa is 5 yrs older than Snape, so are you saying a beautiful 7th year (if she went to Hogwarts) was in love with an ugly 2nd year loner?? And they had a child???? Interesting premise.
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update as soon as you can because I love the story. Oh, have Severus and Lord Malfoy duel.
person pickles87
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the new chapters.
they were very exciting.
glad to see harry straightened sev's way of thinking.
waiting for more.
go get her men!
person Tenar10r
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More!
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. i hope they can all make it out and not be found by lucius.... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you better update again soon, this was a rather evil cliffhanger. I want Hermione and Alex safe and sound away from Malfoy Manor and in Severus arms!!!
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!!

thanks for updating. a brilliant chapter, you have stopped me from combusting tho i may need another fix soon.....!!
person bostonsoxs14
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it please update sooonnnnnnnnnnnnnn!
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person DB1
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@11. awesome chapter, update soon

*DB*