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for Unexpected Places

by SnapesSweetheart

person Citten
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay first love the story! two: do you plan on this story being long- i do hope so! three: how are they sure that lucius is the father? and why would he want to kill his wife? okay now i really want another chapter, PLEASE?! :)
person Angie30
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Re: Chapter 5. Wow I didn't see that one coming! I just hope the father doesn't find out about the babe or maybe he already knows. *shivers* Look forward to more updates.
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus that was so sad about his daughter and what a shocker as to the identity of the actual mother.
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
once again an amzing chapter! i love this story it shocks me around every corner!! i am curious as to why the potion gave narcissa's maiden name... oooh perhaps lucius isn't the father... lets hope so cuz he'd never let hermione keep his child without a fight. i'll be awaiting the next update!
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Narcissa is the mommy "Wow" Now I really need more update's soon Pleaseee.
person sinbad
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a twist I didn't expect. Very good.
person auntbecky
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, Narcissa is Alexs' mother, but the question remains. Who is his father? It may not be who we think it is.
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, talk about unexpected...very nice...I wonder what Draco will have to say...
person wicraven
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG....That's a great twist...but I feel bad for Snape....Great story, please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my what an interesting twist your story took! Narcissa as the babys mother, I wonder if Lucius really is the father? I have fallen totally in love with this story and in the way you portrait Severus and Hermione. You also give us a brilliant Harry, the blood-adoption idea was genious. Promise to update again soon, I need to know where you are taken this story next!!!