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for Ever the One to Comply

by JessikachanHP

person lilyj
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You could just write 'Lucius shoved his cock into his 10yo son and didn't listened his screams'. There are a lot of words here, but it's only cold. It's not hot, not sexy, not perverted, not moving. Just incest theme doesn't mean authomatic sweathing smut. Sorry.
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwws...now Draco needs his Uncle Severus to come and fix him up.
person Extraho
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor draco. lucius could have been a bit more gentle