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for In Between

by YamiBakura

person MrGalion
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have a nice trip.
person Leentjef
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a very very good chapter keep going and
post soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
person Danine
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Who, that was an exciting chapter! Harry has no desire to expire it seems, wizard or not. I do hope he and Draco realise they need to have sex soon, because you know...Okay there isn't really a reason behind me asking that - I just want them to have sex...

I love thinking about Narcissa wearing jeans and tee shirts, hahaha that's awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person kittycat30
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next. I think Draco needs to get a grip though, and start being a little nicer to Harry... Any chance of that happening?
person Dezra
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I can't wait to see Draco's reaction when he finds out who the author really is. When Harry sees Draco again, will he remember anything? Well done.
person Myraa
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, got it. Thanks for explaining (and Prophecies too, thanks!). Hehe, anyways this review goes for both chapter 3 and 4. I liked the whole novel idea, it's really cute how Harry unconsciously write about Malfoy and himself, without even remembering who Malfoy was. And so far I liked Harry's relationship with Shawna, the brother-sister thing. (I hope it'll stay that way!). Can't wait for Draco to get in the picture, hehe! Till then, take care!
person tyree
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant, I love this so far.... I love the pace that you have set. Did I say that this was brilliant? OMG...I caint waite for the next update, I hope it's soon...

Oh can you possibly let me know when you update next??PLEASE.....
person Danine
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that's awesome that Draco and Narcissa have guessed that the characters are he and Harry! I hope it doesn't take a whole year to meet, but I suppose it would be worth the wait. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Leentjef
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KEEP WRITING THIS IS GOOD STORY
AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
person Selera
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I hope you get the next chapter up for this. I can't wait to see Draco's reaction when he finds out Harry is the author.