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person NightLo
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...so that what had happened...a devatasted home, a broken family, a newly formed orphan, a pre-arranged destiny...all of those just made up of one word - hurt...

Only love would cure what hurt has done...
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh how horrible for them! I soooo need chapter 24! Will any of that research help them in this war?
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They are soooo perfect together! I love this! Soooo need chapter 25!
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah ok sooooooooo Im slowly catching up but GAH so much craziness! the fighting and preggersness and yelling with Snape and the stuff about the night Lily and James died and going back in Time GAH! Crazy!! X_X I want so much to read more but Im so dead and i can't...ahhh till tomorrow then!
person graballz
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn it, I'm behind again. Time to play catch up!

Chapter 18--Oh shit, they have to go to Gringott's! I can't even GUESS what's about to happen...except that it's probably going to make me scream and cry, right?

Awwww, they're forever going to agree to disagree about their past, aren't they?

Chapter 19--Oh. My. God. OH. MY. GOD. OH MY FUCKING GOD!!! I can't even COMPREHEND this! This is huge...this is massive...this is SO fucked up, and I'm crying and I don't know why.

This is so powerful....jesus christ....wow...

And the hits just keep on coming! Pregnancy...Caesarean section...well, duh! Why didn't I think of that? It makes perfect sense now. Wait...DRACO "cut the baby out"? (That sounds so horrible, btw) Why can't they get Poppy? Or a real doctor? (and obliviate them) Why does Draco have to...

Whew...what a chapter!
person graballz
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20--Oh. My. God. So full of angst....and I'm crying...that's all I can say.

Chapter 21--I have no idea what is going on. I'm so confused, but I trust that it'll all be explained later.

Chapter 22--Oh...wow....I don't know what to feel...
person NightLo
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...I am confused - didn't Hagrid get Harry at Godric Hollow at night, why instead Draco and Harry get little Harry over?

BTW...Snape, even he openly declared his prejudice towards Lily earlier while still studying at Hogwarts, but when and how did he fall in love? And if he loved Lily so much, did he put up a fight for Lily against James? And Snape hated Harry so much because of...Harry's likeliness of James? Or...resemblance of eyes between Lily and Harry? Whenever he sees Harry's eyes, he will remember his fault of not saving Lily?...If Snape can love, if Snape can show passion, how and when did he close himself up?

I am confused again! Voldermort at first didn't try to kill Lily but aimed at baby Harry, why? What is your guess? And what has happened to Voldermort? Wormtail? Godric Hollows? When will Dumbledore, Snape, Minerva and Hagrid get over and check the house?

Lastly, can love be quarantined and used? Or...is that blue print sample just a test?
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! I sooo need chapter 22! Will any of that info be handy?
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHh I'm so far behind X_X I'm at chapter 14 and I absolutely ADORE Fred and George! I WANTS A COPY OF THAT WITCH WEEKLY! hahahaha I would buy it... and I would DEFINITELY enlist to become an Auror if a hot Harry Potter was asking me to :P
person NightLo
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And I kind of forget...this piece is just heart breaking, as this described how caring and loving both James and Lily were, how warm once this family was...how wrong and unjustice that Voldermort and Wormtail had acted. And the sounds...the wordings and the laughters just made the later screaming and begging being so...sad...this piece made me happy.

Really a good idea of not letting Harry going near Voldermort (and with Draco on his side, his child inside him), he already had enough with this, this heart wrenching/breaking experience - how strong one must be able to re-experience and stand with it? If Harry got near enough, if he could only see...even the scar link has not established...he heart and head would hurt...

And finally...why did Snape arrive?