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schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! I sooo need chapter 34! I can see all of Draco's points but I can see where Harry would get angry about the pureblood part. They've got to calm down and work this out.
person ChiseChan
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap. Trouble in paradise.
person NightLo
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah...Draco is safe, though Narcissa is still no where to be found, but better get him back sooner than later, as he needs to be taken care, and see his son for real, and experience the wonderful miracle of the bond between Harry, Valen and himself!

BTW, would Harry seriously consider changing the binding this time? Would Snape help?
person graballz
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28--OH SHIT! Harry had the BABY in the CELL???? FUUUUUUUUUCK! And JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!!!!! That was one HELL of a birth! GO HARRY AND DRACO! I don't think I could've done it!

Chapter 29--GOD I love it when Draco speaks French!!!!! Even if it's absolutely not sexual in any way...it is just fucking incredible! Awwwwwwww, this is goodbye for Narcissa and Draco, isn't it? Damn! But he needs to get Harry and Valen safe! OH SHIT OH SHIT! The binding promise! Draco! OH NO what's going to happen???? GOD DAMN THAT WAS AN EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!! NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
person graballz
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30--OH SHIT OH SHIT OH SHIT!!!! I don't like the title of this chapter already....my poor baby, Draco!!!!!

YES YES YES YES YES GO HARRY!!! FUCK ALL OF YOU, GET OFF YOUR ASSES AND MOVE TO FIND DRACO!!!!!!!! GO FUCKERS GO!!!!!!!!

OMG OMG OMG YES YES YES WOO HARRY YOU ARE SUCH MY HERO!!!!! WAY TO FUCKING KICK SOME ASS!!!!! TAKIN DOWN THE WARDS....NOW WHAT?

NO NO NO NO NO HE'S NOT DEAD!!!!! HE MIGHT BE BEATEN AND BRUISED AND BLOODY AND NOT BREATHING, BUT HE'S NOT FUCKING DEAD!!!!! I REFUSE TO BELIEVE IT!!!!! HE'S NOT NOT NOT NOT NOT DO YOU FUCKING HEAR ME NOT DEAD!!!!!!!

Oh. My. God. I'm dead. I'm limp. I'm exhausted. I fucking choked to death on my own goddamn saliva out of relief. Okay, so I was adamently refusing to believe that Draco was dead...while still horrified that maybe he was...even though HE COULDN'T BE (because that would probably have made me near-suicidal or something) and then when "Draco's body twitched" I jumped up and began jumping around the room in relief and celebration! And then I fell back onto the bed, choked on my own spit, and hit my head on the windowsill, all while clutching a pillow and trying to be quiet because my mommy is sleeping downstairs.

Ohhhhh, thank you, SlashPervert and company for not killing my Draco! Now, time to beat the FUCK out of MacNair and find Narcissa!
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! Draco! And he's turning cold! He won't last much longer! Soooo need chapter 30! My heart is breaking! They soooo can't get a break!
person cynaga
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter - your stories just get better and better.
person NightLo
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...what a way to give birth, Harry's life really is nothing but common and easy...BTW, Valen is just cute and lovely, esp. with this "He looked down and Valen looked up at him, almost as if he were regarding him coolly. Such a Draco face."

My response is '...now don't stop me from eating my young daddy...don't you know you and I can use magic to produce 'milk'?'...really...something interesting to say/think...just 'Malfoyish'!

And, with the chapter of a parent love...I have a strong feeling that Narcissa is going to sacrifice herself - if Macnair wants Malfoy's property, with Harry and the baby gone, he would just punish Draco and Narcissa together - just to torture each of them...however, with Draco getting cold and deadly (as he wastes time to torture Draco, and with the fact that he knows nothing about that special bond)...he cannot transfer the property properly...so maybe he will force Narcissa to marry him...and then Narcissa will just do something most mother would do - making sacrifices...Or would he ask help? Would he just report to the Dark Lord?

Harry, be quick, don't pass out for too long, Draco is waiting for you, Valen's father is waiting for you...

BTW...why does the imperious curse just slip pass Draco? Anything relate with Valen's special magic/blood? And if ever they are safe with each other, how will they be called respectively? Father? Daddy? Papa? ...Mother?
person ChiseChan
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaaahhhh!!!

Harry blacked out...and now he can't get back to Draco! Draco's gonna dieee if they don't have passionate sex! -Purrs slightly but sobs over the sadness of the situation- More chapppteeersss! ;-; <3
person ChiseChan
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo... Just realized it lists Nec among the many things. That means Harry is gonna go sex the ded Draco to bring him back, huh?