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ARGH!!!!! need more! i've cried, laughed, cried more then almost fainted over the last few chapters! You guys are amazing! MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!

just ealised if you bring Sirius back - sure Remus would be extatic BUT...Tonks?

OH SNAP.




Gimmeeee! MORE CHAPTERS! OwO; THE SUSPENSE!

just love these stories. thank you and keep them coming.

nicely done
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LOL, is it bad that I totally laughed at their fight? Is was very well written and I love that they do fight and that they fight about realistic things, but I just find it kinda funny. They're fighting about if an evil dark wizard murders them both which partially pureblooded pair should raise their gayly conceived little one, lol. Anyway, I think it's funny. I can totally see Draco's point, but I don't know if Ron would understand...
ohh, and by the by HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO DRACO!!!! woot! June 5th!

Chapter 31--OMG OMG OMG DRACO'S ALIVE!!!!! HE LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVES! FUCKING RIGHT HE DOES!

*whimper* childhood fear......oh, that makes me cry! My poor baby! HARRY SAVED HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!

FUCK YOU, MACNAIR! I'll bloody fucking kill you! Bastard! I hope Narcissa is okay, even though I'm pretty much assuming that she's dead.

Ohhhh, there is nothing sweeter than Draco holding his baby! *dying of cuteness* And the girls are crying! No surprise there! hehehe Blonde hair, green eyes...SO PERFECT! Are we really surprised? No, not really, but I still love reading about it!

Oh shit...are they gonna fuck while Harry's nursing Valen? I don't know how I feel about that...*whew* Okay...

WHAT? Lucius and MacNair???? REALLY? Did you mention this before? Because this feels like the first time I'm hearing about it...goddamn!

And what do you mean, Draco can't look for her? He didn't "get away"!!!!! He fucking died and was rescued! So technically, the vow is void because he didn't "get away" so he CAN look for her! Or even if the vow is still in effect, HARRY can look for her, since HE didn't take a vow! Sheesh...

Adorable chapter! I just hope they don't accidentally fall asleep and roll on him or something while he's in bed with them! What am I saying? Of course they wouldn't! They're fucking Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy! Oy!

Chapter 32--Uh oh, we're starting to come to the close of this story! *gulp* What new horrors await? Who's gonna die next? Narcissa?

Mmmmmm, love, hate, blood, magic, sex, death....SWEET! (Because by "death" I think "violent, angry sex"...not actual death)

Uh oh...quick edit: the italics don't stop after the journal entry, just fyi. (Might want to fix that)

*gasp* They were talking about Sirius, weren't they????? Ohhhhh, so many clues, and I wanna know what happens next!

Very interesting point you have put, but before that, let me thanks for the lovely family that you have shown us - I just love the idea of the three interact each other, Valen is cute and lovely, and both Draco and Harry are just too good to be parents. The picture really projects calm, happiness and satisfaction - I would love to read more about that. I believe, with Valen around, they would just mature faster, become stronger and stable. Even they are young, not yet 18 (...), but they already are capable parents and husbands...really very very different from one year before, from those two - vulnerable, fragile, emotional and stressful teenages...love and care for each other (now also Valen) has strengthened them greatly.

And...being busy is no good for child bonding, though I know they don't have a future and Valen's planning if Voldi and Macnair are around, but...it just pains me to see them working so hard on horcrux instead of staying with Valen...hum...really work and family are also complementary opposite - without work, you cannot support your living and daily expenses (though the two will never need this, but we are); however, without family, you simply cannot continue to work for a long long time...

Back to the point about Draco's death - if soul leaving the body signifies death of one person (as Draco is able to brought back by binding, sex and Harry's magic, so his soul has never left his body, maybe his soul has been binded, as long as they are able to have sex or other ways to put magic inside Draco's body)...this means really Sirius and everyone can live and brought back to live as long as the soul remains inside the body...so what situation will separate soul and body? Devoid of feelings such as love and hate? As blood does not leave body, and magic...magic originates from...? life? soul? Still magic does not leave, it is just gone when one dies...if sex can counter death, those two are just there also - then back to my question again - how can we determine when one soul leaves body? Is this what they must decipher / Harry's weapon?

Lastly, they only have 4 months left...however, in these period, they can destroy the remaining horcruxes, take care of Valen and plan and defeat Voldermort - what 4 months would be!

Ch. 32 - one of my favorites~! I love the talk of polarities and magic. I also like to see Draco showing how brilliant he really is (you tend to forget that in the books because he's mostly such a prat).

And Valen is such a lovely character. You keep saying how small he is and that Draco can hold him in one hand; does that mean he is preemie size?

You should make your series available in word docs!

You have brought a freshness to the HP characters without giving up their canon personalities. I love it when Draco gets a bit tiffed with Harry and calls him 'Potter'.

Your work is in the top 3 FF I've read (and I've read a lot - not just HP) and to be able to carry it on to novel length is very impressive.

I know it's fun to write FF but I'd love to read some of your original work (Live Journal is a nice place to post).

Now I've been verbose - pardon. Thanks for your talent and time! XD

~Cindy