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Soooo many close calls! I sooo need chapter 39!

Good work - never thought of using a dead death eater, as an inferius to protect its own horcrux. Now I must admit all wicked evils are indeed genius - just a clear act of pure brilliance!

I like the idea that another baby is on the way - you know - after the masscare of Christmas, it seemed that everything was dead and grey, however, with babies, with new life...there is always new hope, just wishing that such happiness can spread out and cheer up everyone!

Actually I just wondered...why did they not observe and check before going every time? It would be more safe if they could just...(1) go for a check up; (2) plan then (3) act. However, I must admit, maybe there was only one chance, or else voldermort must know...however, after losing Draco so many times, and with such danger ahead...have Harry not had other ideas before this one?

Could Valen and Harry enough to bring Draco back? How about Sirius? Can he....somehow...show Draco's way back if ever he shows up...there - you knew - he was murdered!

Wow, wow and wow~! That knife/horcrux scene - ROCKIN!

"Fucking owned."

I lol'd.

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So Draco figured it out. I sooo need chapter 37! They know where the dagger is!

You know...seeing Sirius was just great, but sad at the same time...how did it feel like...when your loved one can communicate with you? Freely? On his own mind? But without warmth, touches and presence? How did it feel like...when you can see through the mirror, but can do nothing to help, to act, to be there when the living are in danger? That idea was...sweet and cruel at the same time, and suddenly I found that idea was wicked - very very...I just worried about Remus, if his desire to be with Sirium was too strong, would he...accidentally and purposefully somehow planned his murder? Will he desparate enough to do that? If so, would others find out in time? Even when they could find it out...would...would they stop him?

Originally I though - yeah Sirius was not dead, but now I prefer Harry would never find that out somehow...

For Draco and the binding, I would just say...Merlin, it's magic! You know, getting male pregnancy with magic was awesome, now...turning a human into an incubus - that was just.......wonderful? Horrible? I really lost my words this time. And if - if Harry is really that powerful, after he successfully learnt the occulemen and ligilement skills - can he turn Voldi into another thing?

Actually that idea of becoming a kissed living dead, or dead, was really horrible and annoying - the family has just started! They are perfect for each other, and without Draco around, Valen will be hungry, wet and frustrated more; without Harry, Valen ...has no food, not to mention the development of his powerful magic - did others notice that Valen ALWAYS responsed to Harry's magic. It is Harry's magic!!! So I would say...this time, if possible, other should try to locate and open the horcrux...but I know that would be quite impossible...

Lastly, while I enjoyed how they ensured each other, I would bet...after the first word of dad - Valen's second word probably would be 'f**k'...I know talking dirty would turn both Draco and Harry on, but from now on, as they are parents, they should somehow...control themselves - at the very least - put up one silencing charms please...

What a fantastically delightful story!


Happy (late) Birthday to Draco! My favorite bad boy... xD

Oh holy moly! I soooo need chapter 35! Did Valen call Sirius?

...wow, so Sirius might not die after all! What a great revelation - and the most happiest men would be both Harry and Remus!

BTW, a good way to start a fight, and Draco must start teaching pure-blood traditions on Harry - after the war, they would be reintroduced to the circle...but I must agree - a great choice of godparents!