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Why isn't Draco eating? What is going on? Need chapter 5!

...too much of love? Nonsense...then too much of kinks - hey, Harry asked for it...maybe is this a sign of early pregnancy?

I was so happy to see the 4th installment up and 5 chapters to boot. I 've only read the first chapter so far and had to tell you, it is proving to be just as brilliant as the first three novels.

I sooooo need chapter 4! Another piece of art! Fantastic!

Yay next part, can't wait to see what adventures the couple get up to

Can't wait for more!!!!! very interesting so far

:D yay!! Part 4! I'm so glad you've made this such a long series, it's so fantastic! Can I just gush again about how much I love the dual POV style!! :love:
The death eaters being in the dungeon kinda scares me...and it's probably just me being paranoid!Moody but it seems pretty convenient that Petunia was able to escape the DE's by hiding in a closet when the others were AK'd. Wouldn't it be a perfect set up for one of them to disguise themselves as Petunia and get into the Manor. I suppose they couldn't 'act' the dynamics b/t Harry and his aunt but hmm....Ch 3 was fab and Harry showing off his leadership skills in 4 was very promising, Draco's rubbing off on him :p. I just love how sweet Draco is with the baby :squee:
Hafta say I find fisting pretty damn squicky, but I trust you :lol:
can anyone tell me what on earth Nec is? My acronym/abbrv radar is down apparently...

...well...this story starts differently than the others - and it really tells this is a war....it is kind of heavy and sad, we may say - but planning and progress are made, sure if the final horcrux can be found as soon as possible, with the addition of Snape, it would be much better!

Well naturally I would normally comment to a story but really to be honest its more like reading a book to me... I really forget soemtimes that im reading a story that is on the internet and that you guys are looking for feed back.. THe story is really good.. The content is full and you leave very little room for anymore detail.. I think that it has great flow to it and also it always keeps a reader guessing at how things will go next.. I am really looking forward to the time when Harry can no longer hide his pregant state. Thay shall really bring a horde of trouble and drama down upon the place. I will be honest and say that im slightly confused at leaving Harry's Aunt alive. In my view she is a unesscary added character to the story, but like most good books the author always has a reason for everything so im sure to see the full reason later most likely.. So over all great and look forward to reading more and sorry again for not commenting alot.

I'm proud of Harry! He handled things well. Sooo need chapter 5! What about magic binding items? Chokers? Bracelets?