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person Fate-Angel
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing story. You're such a great writer.
I can't wait to read the next one. Literaly...as in that's what I'll be doing in just a few seconds!

Fate-Angel
=^-^=
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's "merci" not "merce"
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The baby is just so precious!!!! I LOVE this fic!!! If it were a published series, i would buy them alllllll! Every last copy of each one ^_^
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been working my way through this series, and so far I have to admit I like it a whole lot. Never read a story that made so much sense or made me want to come back to any computer just to get a fix with a chapter or two. I stay up reading these stories, chapter by chapter, until the site goes down at about 1:08a.m. to update the stories put on that day.

You two are GREAT at this shit.
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say, first off, that I had always intended to review each book as I completed it, but in the desperate, turbulent rush to start on the next one it always seemed to fall by the way side. So here I am, four books in, finally showing my admiring head.

May I also state, that for the record, I am a somewhat large Harry Potter fan and had not been able to afford the recent, series-finishing book, as I am a student and am not given to the somewhat large sum of money it would have taken. However, the book was gifted to me by a friend recently, of which I am eternally grateful. Now, here's the part I have been rambling along to say.

I am halfway through Deathly Hallows, and despite the incredible urge and relief I am experiencing from finally actually reading the book, I have ceased. In all actuality, I would rather read this.

Personally I think that is an incredible compliment to yourselves and you should treat it as such. Although I have the greatest respect and admiration for Jo Rowling, I am gaining more feeling from your series than hers.

And it's not even the relationship between these two young men, although I have to admit, the deft and deliberate way you have handled these two volatile personalities is stunning. No it's more than that. The tale is just as engaging as the original, the storyline and plot well thought out to the point that I even found myself becoming slightly confused when I was reading DH and something didn't match up right. I shortly remembered that the version of events I had been ravenously reading for the past 4-5 days was in fact a fan interpretation and not cannon (but oh how we all wish it were!).

Everything about this story is incredible. And a giant nod in your direction for the varying sex scenes. It's a huge feat for each one to be so different and separate yet barely a chapter goes by without one in some form or manner. I realize how easy it would be to skip over them sometimes, but each is believable and has it's own...life and feeling.

The location and destruction of the horcruxes so far has been stupendous. In all honesty, I feel that the attainment and destruction of the cannon-story horcruxes were no where near as exciting and well-thought-out, and I almost wish sometimes that THIS was the cannon story or that you had somehow been able to get these plot ideas to her before she finished! Haha!

So far it's been brilliant and I am eagerly beginning the next book.

(I promise that I will review at the finale!)
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it took me two days but i read it all. i love your stories. and i cant wait to start the next one.


keep up the excellent work.
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gotta go read the first chapter on LJ!
person NightLo
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...just loved this ending too much, too family, too satiated and happy! Now I understood why Draco suddenly acted like that - the scene maybe turn him on, but most importantly, he was safe, with his family and with a somewhat straighter and brighter future. A perfect and happy future - other things like research on complementary opposites, voldermort, attacks and killing can be waited - now it must TRULY be time for the three!

And I am just too astounded with Valen's progress - with one month or more he can turn his head, and now he knew where his other daddy is, and REACH for it - the two better pay close attention or else...troubles will always be around!
person cynaga
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Does the series really have to end soon? *sniffle*
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous ending to the book!! I congratulate you on quite the accomplishment. I hope the proofing goes well for the next book and it come out very soon! Again, very well done. *sends love and encouragement your way*