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for Shifty Changes (Sev's Version)

by LiveLaughLoveMe

person Anon
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and, hmm... tantalizing I must say. Altough I still don't understand everything about how many animals can Harry shift to. Is it only wolf, after his 17th birthday or is it more, I'm confused.
What happened to the dragon and when did Harry start speaking to dragons? And I can't believe that Harry won't be more upset about being a sub, if he were raised to be a dom.
Loved Harry's reaction and aggresive Severus was just delicious, I'd like to see more of that. Still have the scene from the apothecary in my mind. Wonder how long will Snape have to wait, hope he won't get tired of waiting. And what is he?
Ahhgh! So many questions. But you should be happy, 'cause that means that your story is good and that I did like it and can't wait to read more.
person In2Deep
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this version as well! will you still be updating the original?
person TheKing34
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its good i want harry/snape verson cause that is my fav pairing although i don't mind a girl harry with draco or sev or charlie but any way i hope u keep it sev/harry but with sev dom and harry sub
person sanda
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story
person kunitsu
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved that. I wanna read more update again

I do hope that guy that licked Harry's ear is Severus.
person Selera
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love it.. yes yes yes definetly Sev is a dom. ^^ Gotta love it.
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job. Keep at it.
person Tina
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I like this story. It's very interesting and also funny. I like both versions but I think this is more interesting.I've just seen that you need a beta. i would do that. Just write me if you're interested. I hope you can see my e-mailadress because I have no profile here. Feel free to write.
person Jule
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've read both your Draco and Severus version. This version is much more interesting. My only concern is that you don't make Sheena too central. I think she's a good way to bring Remus into the story, I guess, but nothing kills a story faster than making it all about the OC. I can't wait to see what Severus is up to. Sexually-aggressive-snape threw me for a real loop.
person Tina
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, I've just seen my mail is hidden. It's kato-chan@gmx.net.