rate_review Reviews

This story is bloody fatastic!! I love it even with all of the errors in it. I am curious though... Why did you stop?? Personally I think it is a story that deserves to be finished and adored by the people who read it. I'm sad to see it just stop, but I will look in every once in a while to see if it is continued or just to re-read it. But yea.... Congrats and much love =)

This is a very facinating story and is very dissapointing that had been never finished...

Keep reading this story over and over and it still makes me laugh and cry, just wondering though are you going to be updating again. it is a brilliant story and it would be a shame if you didnt.

This story is bloody well brilliant it made me cry so many times, already looking forward to next chapter

Lucky Hermione! I am looking forward to the next chapter!

This is a really good story! Update more soon please!

Hawt! You write their care for each other with such attention to detail, it's completely believable and super sexy! I can't wait to read more! Where can one find such nice, sexy guys as that? I was a bit confused in this last chapter: they perform that spell on Hermione so that intercourse is less resky with the two guys at the same time, or so that her anti-rape protection spell is deactivated, or both?

I wanted to recommend one source for the details (like Zabini instead of Zambini, Parvati Patil instead of Pavarotti Patel) and that's the Harry Potter lexicon (http://www.hp-lexicon.org/). They have included almost everything from the books, giving page numbers of when events happened. I check the "Which Wizard" whenever I am going to use the characters to make sure things are exact, and soon they'll have book 6 (HBP) in it as well.

The story is wonderful, and I'll keep reading it even with the typos because YOU make the pairing work and take them through interesting plot loops! I am quite eager to read what you come up with next - will Narcissa accept the alternative lifestyle? Will they try to hide Hermione away as the American expert predicted? Squee!

And I completely understand and sympathize with the challenges with the spell checker! One typo that has popped up often and that you could do a "search and replace" in word for before posting the stories is "on slot" I think you mean "onslaught" instead...

Please, please, pretty please with a cherry on top keep writing this story! You can always repost another version with all the revised errors out when you finish the story arc if you'd like to. The only other writer for the D/H/Hr triad that I have enjoyed, Petalsoft, is doing that now. She finished her "What a Which Needs" last year and is now slowly revising and reposting the first chapters again into the same story.

Great story so far. The best piece i've read in the last year even. But look for a beta, please, because your spelling and sometimes even your knowledge about the potter-universe doesen't seem good... lavender and pavarotti? Is lav going to be an opera-star? Her friends name is parvati. tuff? i think you mean tough. blaze: stylish, but wrong, it's blaise sweetie, and blaise zabini without the m... , and i am not even a native speaker... Please do not consider this as a flame, i could never do it better, i worship your story!
Please continue writing!

Wow! You sure weave a complex plot! It's a bit heavy on the backstory yet very believable. Please write more soon! It's wonderful to see the guys taking care of Hermione (and of each other!) you write their relationships beautifully!! The plot has me checking for updates every day - I'm addicted!

Wow! I am impressed. Your story's plotline is an amazingly complex web. As I read, I couldn't understand how Hermione was just lost from your story and several times was going to write and demand to know where she was. Well we found out and your story has me definitely hooked. I'm looking forward to your nextchapter. I recognize that you have grammar errors throughout the story but they take a back seat to your storyline. Well done.