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Poor old Mia; she's in quite a bind isn't she? At least she's got Hagrid on side now.

I'm looking forward to her efforts to seduce our Sev - she's got her work cut out for her! I'm thinking the Yule Ball might be interesting... I bet he'll figure out what she's up to though. Uh oh - trouble ahead!

Throw the thesis on the fire and update soon! xx (OK - not on the fire...maybe shove it in a desk somewhere for a while...)

A very interesting plot. Hopefully, Mia and Snape "hit it off" soon. Update soon, please!

I love the way this ties in with Goblet of Fire - is the Tri-Wizard tournament going to feature as well? Ha ha, Trelawney at breakfast predicting doom - I'd give her a wide berth too. I hope Mia is going to work out that Barty is bad news and fall into the arms of our fave sinister Slytherin sex bomb at some point... Congratulations on your first lemon - it's incredibly difficult to start with, I know. I began my first fanfic (which is Black Flowers Blossom btw) last September and didn't pluck up the nerve to write a full-on sex scene till January. But now I can't stop writing the buggers. So hang on in there, it does get easier. And mmmm, sexy Barty Crouch...though he is a bad 'un, of course.

Oh wow, excellent, her 'friend' is Barty Crouch Jr. What a cool idea! Hands up who fancies David Tennant (hand waves wildly in the air).

I can't wait to see how this pans out... Poor woman, though, having to cosy up with fake Mad-Eye. Rather her than me.

Great; still lots of unanswered questions. So, Mia is somehow mixed up with Voldemort and the nasty character who said she'd sleep with Wormtail if he asked her (ugh!)? I'm guessing she is on some kind of mission to deliver Snape to them? Fancy touching his knee, the little minx! He wants to watch her. What's going to happen next, I wonder??

I'm so curious! Who's the shadow, etc. I'll trust you to answer the questions ;0. Like the dreaming Snape too. Poor sod, he's really in for a ride, isn't he?

Ok I haven't read this yet, but I just wanted to say that seeing Skuld makes me happy! LOL I loved AH! My Goddess, so that name holds a special place for me, LOL Ok, I will read now and review later :P

I really like this spooky sexy shadow invention; it's very unusual. I'm trying to work out how it all ties in with Mia and her mysterious correspondent...but I'm stumped for now. I guess there's nothing for it but to wait for the next update. Every time I see your title, though, I get 'Making Your Mind Up' by Bucks Fizz in my head...lol.

Intriguing start; I want to know what this shadowy presence could be. It's got the hots for Snape, whatever it is - I like it. Let's have more.

Please update soon I would love to read some more.